great one-shot! I really liked it! :D
love the interaction between Halt and Will!

although when you say that the healer was 'stitching up the meat' I would probably have used the word flesh instead. Although people would understand it as it is, it's just a suggestion!

I loved it, amazing job!

not bad

one shots?
You should do some truth or dare,always goes over well!

omg, this is one of the best fanfictions i have ever read!