| Reviews for Where I Belong |
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The Anime Princess chapter 1 . 3/24/2016 omg. loved it |
FangirlFreakYoli chapter 1 . 12/7/2013 This was soo awesome! You are amazing! |
bettybox chapter 1 . 3/19/2013 i love it...makes me want to hit Mr. Anderson in the face, but hell who wouldn't :) |
BatFlashAquaven11 chapter 1 . 11/10/2012 Love this! |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/8/2012 I love this this is beautiful I have to admit it made me cry a little ;) |
DEC-OSM chapter 1 . 10/22/2012 Sooooo beautiful, really good! :) so many klaine feelings! ;) |
KickNamezTakeAss chapter 1 . 10/18/2012 1. Love the story 2. I have a prompt: A Michael remake where Kurt gets hit by the slushie and Blaine freaks out! |
StrawberryDuckFeathers chapter 1 . 10/16/2012 Aww! This is was such a cute fic! I don't know why, but it seems the fics written about gay pairings seem to be better than the straight ones, in my opinion. I have no idea why. Maybe it's because I'm so used to seeing straight couples in books that it's nice to see a difference. I found it so cute when Blaine sang Kurt to sleep; it reminded me of when people sing babies to sleep :P This was really sweet and cute. You're a great author! :D Here's my critique and some suggestions: .'Blaine paid for their coffee before Kurt could even get his wallet out of his pocket. Blaine handed Kurt his coffee, and pulled his chair out for him'. This part needs a full stop/period at the end. .'"Okay, so I have something to tell you. And you may or may not like it," Blaine nervously toyed with the edge of his coffee cup.' I think that, since the following part is not a dialogue tag, I think that the line of speech should have a full stop/period at the end,rather than a comma. (I think that's how it goes; I'll have to look into that a bit more.) The same goes for: '"My parents are tire of hearing me talk about someone they haven't even met, so they want to meet you," Blaine looked up from the table to see strong relief wash through Kurt's beautiful eyes. Blaine wondered what Kurt thought he was going to say.' And for: '"Oh, hello. You must be Kurt. We've heard so much about you. Blaine never stops talking about you," the woman shook Kurt's hand, and Kurt had to keep from giggling at Blaine's crimson face.' .'I don't think I can bare it.' In the sense of 'to handle/cope with', 'bare' is spelt 'bear'. .'My parents are tire of hearing me talk about someone they haven't even met'. 'Tire' should be 'tired'. .'That Friday…' Instead of this, maybe use the horizontal line break instead to show the paragraph change. :) .'in-front' would be fine without the hyphon. This is an amazing fic, keep it up! When it comes to Glee fanfiction, I think the Klaine stories are normally written the best. :) If you need some prompts, then maybe you could do a one-shot of a scene of them at a cafe, or in a stor, or maybe by the beach or something. :) Keep up the great work :D |
Calico Productions chapter 1 . 10/16/2012 Thank you, thank you, thank you! I love this so much. It really tuched my heart. If there's ever anything I can write for you in return, please let me know. I will treasure this story always. Happy writing! |
CrissColferCrowe chapter 1 . 10/15/2012 Mr Anderson, what a douche. I love stories like these! :D |
Ampria chapter 1 . 10/15/2012 I have an overwhelming desire to hunt down Blaine's father and kill him. Nobody comes between my boys. In fact, I am pretending that the last episode of Glee never happened. I love the visual image of Baline holding Kurt on the couch. They are just so cute together. |