Amazing work. Wonderful. Thank so much author.

Waoh, what a ride. I'm pretty sure I forgot to breathe in between as your fic was so captivating. I so loved all the angst and of course the Sterek. Great story line, too.

Hot!

Omg! I haven't put this story down since I started reading it. I loved it and I am now getting excited to read the next story. This one was great. Can't believe jackson died but maybe we will see peter and her or something. I understand Derek wants stiles safe but he could of waited after he's out of hospital bless him. They belong. Don't push him alway lol. I loved it! Now going to read what happens next and with this new girl coming in to it. I already feel a bad vibe.

The actual fuck? Wow... I couldn't stop reading and then this... :/ should've seen it coming.

DON'T GET ME WRONG I'VE LOVED IT EVER STEP OF THE WAY! YOU'RE AMAZING! Thank you for writing! Going t read the next one now :3

Okay so I'd forgotten how much I loved your writing. I kept getting updates from this story but didn't watch Teen Wolf at the time and then I started to and was like, well let's read it then and OMG I'm so glad I did! I can't wait to read the follow-up -it'd better end happily! Though, the ending of this was great. Ah. Yeah, can't give you enough praise x

Very good story! I liked it, now I will start to read the sequel :)

I would be pretty pissed off investing all this time for such an unsatisfying ending IF I hadn't read the follow-on story first. Interesting. Well written. Ending sucked!

If this were real, I would say Derek is ridiculously lucky Stiles probably won't act like I would if that finale happened to me.
For one; Derek and Scott would be completely ignored as well as any other Pack members who go along with this. Though I would probably not hold out very long...
Secondly; if we ever did get back together, he'd be paying for doing that for as long I could manage. If you know what I mean.

One way to describe it: I WOULD BE PISSED.

Oh God... That Ridiculous!

How could you!?

Jackson is dead!

And now just because Stiles is human, doesn't mean you have to left him as his protection!

DAMN YOU ALL!

WHY?!

#roared in frustration

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#sobbed weakly

...but i admit it, that the rest of the story, before the ending, was Great and Wonderful...!

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I liked Tom and Danny...

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#sobbed

I'm sad...!

Because Stiles is hurting now...! D':

The way you introduced the title was amazing, it was perfect, felt like a movie tbh and i could just see it so perfectly that it was just amazing, im gonna be stuck on that for a few days now

am really speechless riight now...like...

Wow. I really enjoy reading your fic, it's awesome! I love Derek being jelous and I hope that in the next chapters I'll find a Derek super jelous!

I loved this story so much! I ate it all up in 3 days because I just couldn't stop reading it! Were there a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes? Yes, a whole ton but it didn't matter because your writing is very intelligent. I'm serious. There was some great plot building and character development in here. Not to mention, it never felt like the dialogue was pointless or "just thrown in there". They actually sounded like real and relevant conversations and not only that but they were in character on top of that! That's what I loved the most about this. So much angsty stuff written with Sterek has the boys acting too feminine or too emo. You portrayed Stiles frustration and confusion about Derek perfectly and had him angst it up when he was hurt while still actively taking a heavy role in the story and trying to help his "pack mates". And you portrayed Derek's thought processes very well. He wasn't just being stupidly stubborn and fighting his feelings to be an emo jerk. He actually had very understandable reasons for all the waffling. Very well done and I can't wait to get started on the sequel!

It's a great story. Beautiful and dramatic, very strong. I hurt for Stiles and I'm crying ... I love your story ..
Sorry for bad English.