do another one please.

So sweet. I enjoyed your story!

Aww! :-) I thought this was a very charming fic. I love how she called out to him half consciously. It was very romantic.

Loved the story. Thanks!

Awww, this was lovely!

This has indeed been a very interesting read and thanks for sharing.

This story is so good. Thank you. Not to be greedy or anything but could you please do an epilogue, that takes place at the very moment Seven visited in her dream.

A wonderful ending!

You did well with this :)

What a wonderful closing line. It really suits the story and is so perfect. The conversation between Seven and Chakotay was lovely. Wonderful. Just wonderful! Great job!

SD04

Great story.!

Aww honey, I loved it. This chapter was so beautifully written, it looks like Seven's dreams are going to come true in the future. She has taken the first few tentative steps toward Chakotay. I loved all their interactions in this chapter, the hand holding, the eye contact, the blushes. All the little intimate details you add to your story really brings it alive.
Thank you so much for writing this story, I have really enjoyed it!
Nikki :)

LOVE the hand-holding. Their guards are dropping away so naturally. Excellent. Easily one of my favs by you.

OMG, you never disappoint! Can't wait for the next chapter.

Another great one, I love the idea and how you wrote it was soo good. I love how chakotay found her which mean he was checking on her and couldnt stay away. Cant wait to read more

I'm starting to really get into this story - I can't wait for the next chapter and Seven and Chakotay's talk :D