| Reviews for All the Time in the World |
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shadowquill17 chapter 1 . 7/11/2014 Beautiful moments, I'm glad you didn't kill Cas. |
JuniorWoofles chapter 1 . 6/4/2014 Not expecting two major deaths but nice and sweet ending to underplay that |
BlueNeutrino chapter 1 . 11/28/2013 A beautiful piece, and very well crafted. The change in mood from the first part to the second part was very effective, and the contrast between the serenity of the first section and the brutality of the second, before returning to a more bittersweet but peaceful ending gave the whole thing a lot of impact. You have a good handle on the characters and I thought Cas' dialogue in particular was done well. I liked how you handled the "I love you". On my first read through I felt it seemed too sudden, but that may be because I wasn't expecting it. Given how the opening felt like it wouldn't be out of place in canon, and I've almost accepted that Dean will never say "I love you" to Cas in canon, it came as a surprise, but a pleasant one. I think Dean's reaction to it was handled well. Oftentimes I've read fics where either he'll freak out, or take that as his cue to immediately grab Cas and kiss him, but I like how in this case his reaction was more internalised, which I think was very in character. Cas disappearing when Dean looks away was also a nice touch. The ending in particular made me emotional. It's always been a thing for me that any fic in which Cas and Dean die and Sam gets left behind, or Sam and Dean die and Cas is left behind, or any variation on that hits me pretty hard, but the inclusion of memory!Sam in this made it even more bittersweet. The repetition of "all the time in the world" was very powerful. Overall, I enjoyed this story very much and I think everything was pitched just right. It really captured the true essence of the relationship between Dean and Cas and your writing is a pleasure to read. I'm not as invested in Hilson as I am Destiel, but if your House stories are written as well as this, then I definitely think they'll be worth a read. |
God chapter 1 . 5/8/2013 Nothing about this story is okay you hear me So fucking sad and beautiful I'm sobbing right now no |
honeybadger42 chapter 1 . 11/19/2012 Great fic! Beautifully heartbreaking. Definitely made me tear up. |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/25/2012 absolutely beautiful. one of my favourites! |
IWatchTVStaticAndThinkIt'sFun chapter 1 . 10/19/2012 Aw this is so adorable 3 I love |
Casismyfavorite chapter 1 . 10/18/2012 Very sweet. I was sad but the end made up for it :) |
hikarilightz chapter 1 . 10/17/2012 -cries- omg. i loved the ending. the repetition of the sentence: "We have all the time in the world", is so effective. ;u; i love it so much. my favorite scene was actually the part where dean and cas looked at the stars. mmn it was so heartwarming.. ;u; now i will suffer in an hour when episode 3 airs. ;A; but thanks for uploading this! |
HiM'e'iTSu chapter 1 . 10/16/2012 I don't even know if I'm feeling happy or sad after reading this story. But, anyway, it was good and the ending is cute. So, I guess not too sad:) |
dragonlover131313 chapter 1 . 10/15/2012 OMFG why would you do that, the feels oh gawd, why. I am literally freaking out at that ending. Holy shit, just *sobs* why. |
Totallytwistedwords chapter 1 . 10/15/2012 I'll just go sob in a corner now. No worries. |
Catateme9 chapter 1 . 10/15/2012 A surprising mix of sweet and sad. Good job! |
starshaker chapter 1 . 10/15/2012 This was beautiful. Heartbreaking at times but beautiful... You write them very well :) xx |
emotions chapter 1 . 10/15/2012 I'm not even a sensitive person, but this made me tear up... I have been overcome with feelings. This was a beautifully fluffy fanfiction. |