oh i love this! i think it is really natural and sweet and funny.

good work!

It was interesting I really think that you should writing and that there is always going to be room for improvement,
I think that your interpretation of the characters was good.

One day you'll look back on all your work, and when you read this one you will feel aches of pleasure coursing through you just like I did.

Yours Sincerely
The Nameless

Yus! Awesome smut! Loved it!

It was amazing! Your a great fanfiction writer.

...here have a condom

Not surprising that Natsu has a lot of stamina in bed. :)

go Natsu. wish he was mine.

Good *gulp* story, even after reading a lot of lemons just so that you can read the fluff at the end I'm still not used to them, but hey I'm getting a great sex education, lol :)

Holy shit. What the hell. How does he have so much stamina

Well damn that was hot!

Dominant!Dominant!

Awasammmm. I loved it sooo muchhhhh.

Lol! Loved the ending! That was hilarious.

Yes Lushy,again. Plus, Natsu has a lot of energy soo, Yea. XD

I liked this one but I was quite hard to picture Lucy in a sex dragon costume, I noticed that some things were in another story not implying anything and u put natsu dum about kisses and sex at the beginning but he took over Lucy at the end
BTW: all together I think this was a great fanfic and should be
continued on with grey and jealousy or make another one like
with grey being jealous

I feel slightly dirty... but great story!