Reviews for Erratic Dreams
Guest chapter 1 . 8/17/2013
wow why am i crying over a pong fanfic
MattsyKun chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
I didn't know fanfics for Pong existed.

But this.

This is just beautiful.
StoriUrahara chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
Awwww :3 I loved it; the struggle for light .

Great job!

Daughter of Hat-n-Cloggs
Yoshizilla-Rhedosaurus chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
...there's no proper reaction to how wonderful this fanfic is.

You deserve a medal for writing such a great piece. Thank you.
Seiferdragon chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. I laughed, I cried, I beeped.
I love the arrangement of this gorgeous creature; I find the symmetry absolutely captivating. A riveting tale of what could have been. I love the paddle ambiguity here. I personally find the left paddle much more articulate, but slightly colder than right. I was really starting to ship LeftXBall, but this story left me much doubt about who was caressing ball so gently in a tender embrace to end all except one of the embraces that Seifer gave Hayner that one time I wrote a story kinda like this with run-ons and such you remember that.
I hope paddle meets ball again soon.