Reviews for Erratic Dreams |
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Guest chapter 1 . 8/17/2013 wow why am i crying over a pong fanfic |
MattsyKun chapter 1 . 3/6/2013 I didn't know fanfics for Pong existed. But this. This is just beautiful. |
StoriUrahara chapter 1 . 12/16/2012 Awwww :3 I loved it; the struggle for light . Great job! Daughter of Hat-n-Cloggs |
Yoshizilla-Rhedosaurus chapter 1 . 10/28/2012 ...there's no proper reaction to how wonderful this fanfic is. You deserve a medal for writing such a great piece. Thank you. |
Seiferdragon chapter 1 . 10/14/2012 Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. I laughed, I cried, I beeped. I love the arrangement of this gorgeous creature; I find the symmetry absolutely captivating. A riveting tale of what could have been. I love the paddle ambiguity here. I personally find the left paddle much more articulate, but slightly colder than right. I was really starting to ship LeftXBall, but this story left me much doubt about who was caressing ball so gently in a tender embrace to end all except one of the embraces that Seifer gave Hayner that one time I wrote a story kinda like this with run-ons and such you remember that. I hope paddle meets ball again soon. |