Reviews for Immortals |
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![]() ![]() Ok. Now THAT was beautiful. |
![]() ![]() I love this one shot, it's awesome great work |
![]() ![]() ![]() On the second paragraph, you might want to change Tim to Jason. Just saying. |
![]() ![]() ![]() People are so incredibly deep sometimes. You've really blown me away. |
![]() ![]() You may want to look at the grammar of the last sentence, though. It's funky. (I forgot to put this message in the rest of my review, unfortunately.) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh this is a good one. You did a wonderful job capturing Conner's sadness at the loss of his fellow heroes, and I loved the way the story followed Conner to his decision to publicly memorialize their deaths. Great read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so sweet I love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ... This was absolutely beautiful. Now, excuse while I go cry for my beloved Jaybird... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great job I love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful. Simply beautiful |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was awesome. I love how deeply Conner felt to loss of not only his friends, but the only proof, physical proof they were honored. I love the plaque. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was beautiful. |
![]() ![]() Ah so realistic and emotional! |