Reviews for Immortals
Guest chapter 1 . 5/7/2018
Ok. Now THAT was beautiful.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/12/2018
I love this one shot, it's awesome great work
Nicercylover108 chapter 1 . 11/16/2015
On the second paragraph, you might want to change Tim to Jason. Just saying.
8annie81 chapter 1 . 8/10/2013
People are so incredibly deep sometimes. You've really blown me away.
J the Drafter chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
You may want to look at the grammar of the last sentence, though. It's funky. (I forgot to put this message in the rest of my review, unfortunately.)
J the Drafter chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
Oh this is a good one. You did a wonderful job capturing Conner's sadness at the loss of his fellow heroes, and I loved the way the story followed Conner to his decision to publicly memorialize their deaths. Great read.
Purple Majestic chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
This is so sweet I love it!
batman-defeats-all chapter 1 . 10/15/2012
... This was absolutely beautiful.
Now, excuse while I go cry for my beloved Jaybird...
Hockeygirl28 chapter 1 . 10/15/2012
Great job I love it
scarletsailor chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
Beautiful. Simply beautiful
Haunt of twilight chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
That was awesome. I love how deeply Conner felt to loss of not only his friends, but the only proof, physical proof they were honored. I love the plaque.
RenkonNairu chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
This was beautiful.
Kaliann chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
Ah so realistic and emotional!