Ooh, love this. It is smooth. And attracting. And dramatic, but the in a reasonable amount. And how you present the characters is good too. Great story! 3 :)

Excellent

This is most excellent!

This was excellent! Hopefully Holmes learned his lesson about snooping through Watson's bag, but I'm not so convinced that his resolution will last, at least not permanently. :)

Great story, thanks for sharing!