Another hiatus, are you planning to finish this or not? Please let us know.

Only a sexist misogynistic person such as yourself doesn't recognize Ana'svintelligence and strength or Christian's growth

Are you on drug? Whoa?

i love it. your a good writer maybe you could write more its amazing. plz write more

Hi - This last chapter is totally confusing but I enjoyed the twist on the first three. Try to give us the goods on the photo session. I think you're quite funny! JS

Should have stayed on hiatus. This is boring.

After skimming through the story, I have to ask why you would write this? I know people wanted AS to be a stronger character, but this is so far off the mark.

Your summary turned me off. Its the kind of surperiority that makes hypocrites of people like you. You hate the protagonist and yet here you are creating a rather annoying version of her or is it a version of you, being snarky and totally unlikable. Good luck with your new story. I hate it already.

Finally...oily, scary and so fun to read.

Its more like what he wants to do to her... lolol

OMG, what a load of crap. You desperately need a mood enhancer.

I normally don't give reviews to badly written stories, but I'll make an exception for yours.

This is one of the funniest takes on 50 that I have read. You go girl! You really are rockin this one out. I love you describing C as oily and cliched... And her dreams of him are hysterical.

Subscribed and eagerly awaiting the next chapter. This is just awesome.

bauwhahahahahah - this is just awesome.

Interesting take. The book makes C looks so in control and attractive. So funny that your Ana finds him sleezy and oily... Can't wait for next chapter.