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i'll kill the demon who killed Yukio

This made me cry. It was the sadist thing that I have ever seen.

You weren't kidding when you said it was a tear jerker. *sits in corner balling eyes out*

Oh my god, this is so sad! I NEVER *sniffle* THOUGHT *sniffle* THAT ANYTHING *sniffle* COULD BE SO SAD! It's so much pain! *sniffle* Nii-san, I pray that it's a joke. Oh my god, *sniffle* why's the world so cruel?! Why must Rin onii-chan live just so he can wake up every damn day alone?! Why must he suffer and endure the pain alone?! *sniffle* Why?! *sobs*

*crying under the pillow* Gah! Reading this while listening to Utada's Hikari is a bad idea if you want to keep your pillow clean.

But, despite being angsty, I like this. Touching. Listen to Hikari (not the remix, but orchestra version is fine) for more effect.

Wow, this was very emotional! I really felt every word *sniffle* good job, though!...cries in corner

Ermahgred! This was soooo AMAZING! It was so sad but so good. I loved it! TT

OMG You were toltally right that was a tear jerker... it would be nice if you updated your fanfics. speciffically more oniichan.

I cried! I cannot help, but see so many emotions rolling inside me. Is it how it feels...to let someone go, hope that they will be there...? I just can't help but say, that you have done amazing job, bringing out the emotions here...I just...

this is too good for me. im crying now and it is awesome. its like ... argh i cant describe... its great

T-T lovely... You made cry.

Praise: I'm literally crying right now. This was amazing, the lack of dialogue not at all affecting the quality of the piece, in fact (in my opinion) making it more meaningful. I absolutely adored the way you made Yukio's last words the end of the story. The suspense leading up to us finding out what his last words actually were was perfect. A beautiful work, I'm looking forward to reading more of your literature. I don't need anymore tissues, do I? :)

Constructive Criticism: Not much of anything. If anything, I'd say perhaps a bit too much detail on the hospital scene, but I'm not really sure if that's all-together a bad thing. All in all, Molto buono.

I was contemplating whether or not I should read this... tragedies never go down well with me (EVEN IF IT'S ONLY SLIGHTLY TRAGIC). WHY DO I DO THIS TO MYSELF. Anything that has to do with one Okumura leaving the other, or one of them becoming a prisoner, one of them dies, or Yukio dies from old age while Rin stays young due to his demon powers I JUST LOSE IT!

ERUGH this brought tears to my eyes. Those poor... precious... BABIES. I couldn't control myself at "Stay happy for me". Nope. I'm done. SOOOO DONE. I can't keep my feelings anymore!

Great job on the story though T_T *sniffles* Well done! I need to go...get some air before I go cry some more.