Reviews for Forever is a Long Time
Der Puppenmacher chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
interesting start :D
Cupcak3 chapter 2 . 10/20/2012
##3333333333333333333333333333 33 love absolutely!
Guest chapter 2 . 10/19/2012
LOVE IT!
Guest chapter 2 . 10/17/2012
You just called Draco Malfoy a squid... Did you mean squib?
Death Sounds Like a Lullaby chapter 2 . 10/17/2012
I feel like this fic has so much potential. Update soon!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
hmmm...I'm not sure but I think you don't have to capitalize 'is'...
Emriel chapter 2 . 10/17/2012
this chapter was... wao. amazing.

I loved how bloody and descriptive it was of the blooood. I have high hopes for this!
sousie chapter 2 . 10/17/2012
that was wow i loved it keep u the good work
Haruhaze chapter 2 . 10/17/2012
as I expected of Tom, sarcasm is one of his prominent features, and you wrote it quite well here. I understand that there's a reason why Tom is in Draco's body, but if you can, please let him have his own body as soon as possible (since I'm a TomHar fan, it's quite hard to imagine Tom's red eyes and sexy parseltongue tone on Draco's face, you understand right?).

look forward to next chapter
nyphm chapter 1 . 10/13/2012
Interesting
animefan1991 chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
I want more please and i like the flashback it will helps explain to the reader harry's thoughts at the beginning more soon please :)
Picas Lei-Fur chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
In your case, I think capitalizing it is better... and you wrote 'adapted,' when it was supposed to be 'adopted.' :) The plot sounds really intriguing. Please update soon!
Lilbka chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
Great start, I cant wait to read more! Only thing i'll say is you wrote the 'adapted son ..'. Instead of adopted.
sousie chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
oh seem intersting update soon
Guest chapter 1 . 10/13/2012
Wow, an intriguing beginning, definitely worth looking forward to! Though, there were some (a moderate amount) minor and silly errors to which you might find it best to address when you have the time to do so.
Thanks for the upload. :')
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