Amazing :)

hehe, fantastic ;)

This is brilliant. this is the kind of Draco/Ginny I can stand to read. It keeps both of them so in character. I loved these lines:
"We're in a Muggle area, like you just said. So why are you blabbing on like the Statute of Secrecy is a bedtime story?"
"girlfriend to the Man-Who-Died-And-Wouldn't-Stay-The-Hell-Dead."
"I'm about to make a joke about Voldemort, but then I remember who I'm talking to. Probably wouldn't be in good taste. Damn."
"If I were to murder you, I'd do it right. An iced mocha with whipped cream, or something."

Forgive me for a moment... I might actually be seeing the Drinny appeal. :D Great work.

'Man-Who-Died-And-Wouldn't-Stay-The-Hell-Dead', such a Draco thing to say, I love it.

This was definitely one of the better Draco/Ginny's I've read. My favourite part has to be 'Man-Who-Died-And-Wouldn't-Stay-The-Hell-Dead' Plenty of great sarcasm and in-character-ness. Loved how you pulled off the first person, it's fun isn't it? No SpaG errors, that I noticed. Good job and keep writing!

Oh, wait, I'm not the paranoid one.

**This line confused me a bit. I'm guessing she's supposed to be saying that Draco is being paranoid, but that hasn't really been set up in the story yet, so I stumbled on this sentence a bit.

And while my coffee does go whee! in the air as I throw up my hands, the look of pure horror on Draco Malfoy's face as he sputters and wipes coffee off his face is definitely worth the waste of my favorite morning beverage.

**This is an awesome line and I love the tone, because it's totally fitting for an excitable Ginny and the last part of the line especially is hilarious.

"If I were, I would use your cup, not mine," I say with a sniff. It's hard to remain dignified when soaking and probably burned, as we're both discovering. Oh, shared experiences, bonding, how you warm my soul.

** Another hilarious line!

I realize about now that I am paying way too much attention to his face than is healthy.

** Haha, perfect way of capturing Ginny's feelings in an IC and not head-over-heels-in-love sort of way.

This may be Draco Malfoy but he is also hilarious.

**I don't think this line is necessary; I think it's better to let people infer that he's being funny from his lines and Ginny's response of laughing.

**Overall, I really liked this one-shot. It was hilarious and cute yet IC (which can be hard for a Ginny/Draco, I think). Great job!

hehe :)

I think this was nice and sweet, the humour is subtle between their banter, and you portray their relationship and Ginny's emotions really well. The writing is great, no errors or spelling mistakes which is great. Good job!

I have to say you had me at the title. "Hot Beverages are Hot." Love it. Now for my review. I really liked this one. I often don't read your Harry Potter fanfiction because I'm not one for crossgen. Still I really enjoyed this. I like the Ginny/Draco pairing, the plot and the way it was written. You normally do third person limited, but your first person is nice to. I am trying to find something to critique, but it's hard. Sarcastic Ginny and Snarky Draco are hard to argue with. All and all I enjoyed.

Dawnfire

Too bad this is a one-shot because the story-line is awesome. Would you reconsider making this into a story? :3

Yay! Drinny! I like all the sexual tension and how Ginny keeps having to remind herself that he's a Malfoy.
"There's that sneer again. I almost missed it. But not really" - I love that! Because there's something so endearing about how obnoxious he is. And she's just as bad and they play off each other so well. I also like that they're able to crack jokes at the end. The hilarious side of Draco doesn't always translate so I'm really happy you put that in here.
Overall, this was lovely. Thank you so much! :D