Wow u wrote this soo well

Wow u wrote this soo well

Amazing!

I wish I could think of clever and insightful criticisms to give, but I'm tired and this story is emotionally draining in the best way, so I'll just say this: you've written a beautiful story here.

Feeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeelssss!
So much feels you are too good at this

Wow this is amazing I wish there was more to it but still a great fic. ( I don't know why but I love it when my favourite heroes suffer). This would have made a great episode

Nice story I liked it :D

I hope this isn't the end I loved this chapter we need a chapter for when they Come back, and they find out Artemis isn't dead. And them bonding again

Go. Make this real. Please.

Awe so cute! I love it! But who's Raquel's true love? You aren't missing up Bumblebee and Rocket are you?

I love the happy ending! You could've made this so dark and depressing but with everything that's going on in the show, this is nice. It's awesome D

we don't know who Raquel's marrying so it could be her abusive boyfriend I think she had in the comics if thats true...it won't be a happy covo between him and Kal

Frigging awesome dude.

Oh wow! I love it! I'm so happy that Jamie gets the scarab back! This is so sweet!

You need to take Young Justice by force from Cartoon Network and Grandon. So you can treat them nice and loving like this.