Your posts are bullshit. Take these down. They’re not even stories anymore.

I hope it comes out realy soon, I would love to reread it.

I like how realistically you've written this first chapter with it's hardships. He was lucky to get away alive.

So many clever lines:

"And looked sorry about it for all the years Bella knew her, until Billy died, then Loretta just kept looking sorry." - lol
"Mrs. Black took some noisy swallows of the water then set the cup with a tin thump"- I could picture that perfectly!

"Sit down, Bella," Jacob said when he could curb his temper enough to look at her. She saw that now…anger." - that was a sign from the word go. he would always have a temper.
"Least I don't want to better myself by marrying my own blood," she said.
He slapped her face.

The whole chapter is quoteable!

I have not read this before, how did that happen?
Wow poor Edward at 14 losing his parents in such a tragic way.
Thank you for writing this, enjoying it already.

I was worried for them, with WW2 coming. But as a doctor, he'd have less risk. Not be on the front lines. And I'm sure they will end up together, the group. Jasper will follow E. And Rose will want B and Alice.

Love this. You, the Black Arrow and Elise de sallier... Now I have 3 favorite authors. Thank you!

Love him. Now how do they get out with the whole gang intact?

Not clear on why b is so mad at him. I know she was worried but he's ok...

Poor Rose.

Thought it was Alice or Rose... But Rose makes more sense

Good, time for J to die

Emm is planning to make j part of a work accident. He told e before, right?

Wow, are we all like that during mense? Poor E! But good to get it all out. And B really has had no time to adjust.

Oh, feeling dread. James wants her.

Brought to mind a mini cartoon they used to show during sat morning cartoons here in canada as a kid in the 70/80's. The log drivers waltz. Loved it.