Reviews for Beneath the silence |
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![]() ![]() ![]() yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy i liked it sooo much i love these with a passion make a new one plzzzzzzz |
![]() ![]() ![]() Like Ino and Naruto together, very good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() WHAT TYPE OF LEMON WAS THAT?! ! |
![]() ![]() That was fucking disgusting. The story was cliche but that rape scene... That was so idiotic to put that in! Absolutely lame! It came SUDDENLY.. WITHOUT any pre indication whatsoever... and was over in an instant! Do you think your readers are your guinea pigs? Find someone else to experiment your emotional bullshit on! Also - Dont use rape and captivity to make your story dramatic. Rape is serious buisness dont go using it so lightly. The story needs improvement, you will do well with practice. Dont EVER put in a rape scene so casually. Also please be plausible while writing their relationship. It is just progressing way too fast. |
![]() ![]() ![]() finish this already |
![]() ![]() No one wants Hinata. Kill yourself, virgin. |
![]() ![]() I love it! I actually hate sasuke but this was certainly the most adorable sasuke ever! Sakura is the same.. Bitch as ever.. Hinata.. Kickass! Oh my it's been a year since u updated.. Please update soon.. It's really fun.. I completed all the 16 chapters in one go.. Pls update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good, liked it a lot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Complete and utter garbage. Delete this filth. |
![]() ![]() nice story please update soon i mean very soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon! |
![]() ![]() See who? That was a great chapter, can't wait to read more, update soon please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope whatever Sakura planned fails. Good chapter, update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Stupid sakura b... u are a f... sult i hate u n always have u should have died! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMFG i was shaking all the way through that with anger t sakura. I just wanted to be there with Hina-Chan punching sakuras face |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sweett! sasuhina rocks!:) hahaha u deserve shit sakura u totally suck how could u! Naruto love u!:/ juz cuz of a guy u turn into a ass..like really! Plus I just hate u like a million time more than usual! Dun u dare break up hinata n sasuke they r meant for each other! Aweaome story ! 6 |