Reviews for Beneath the silence
xxX.neoncat.Xxx chapter 6 . 12/18/2017
yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy i liked it sooo much i love these with a passion make a new one plzzzzzzz
Saki-Hime chapter 17 . 12/26/2016
Like Ino and Naruto together, very good.
beththeboss chapter 15 . 12/25/2016
WHAT TYPE OF LEMON WAS THAT?! !
Guest chapter 9 . 12/22/2016
That was fucking disgusting. The story was cliche but that rape scene...
That was so idiotic to put that in! Absolutely lame! It came SUDDENLY.. WITHOUT any pre indication whatsoever... and was over in an instant! Do you think your readers are your guinea pigs? Find someone else to experiment your emotional bullshit on!
Also - Dont use rape and captivity to make your story dramatic. Rape is serious buisness dont go using it so lightly.
The story needs improvement, you will do well with practice. Dont EVER put in a rape scene so casually. Also please be plausible while writing their relationship. It is just progressing way too fast.
cespericueta35 chapter 17 . 12/20/2016
finish this already
guest chapter 17 . 12/9/2016
No one wants Hinata. Kill yourself, virgin.
AddictedToNaruto chapter 16 . 8/28/2016
I love it! I actually hate sasuke but this was certainly the most adorable sasuke ever! Sakura is the same.. Bitch as ever.. Hinata.. Kickass!
Oh my it's been a year since u updated.. Please update soon.. It's really fun.. I completed all the 16 chapters in one go.. Pls update soon!
Saki-Hime chapter 16 . 4/10/2015
Very good, liked it a lot.
Banjo the Fox chapter 1 . 3/5/2015
Complete and utter garbage. Delete this filth.
sarah chapter 15 . 11/25/2014
nice story please update soon i mean very soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon!
Saki-Hime chapter 15 . 9/10/2014
See who?

That was a great chapter, can't wait to read more, update soon please.
Saki-Hime chapter 14 . 2/28/2014
Hope whatever Sakura planned fails. Good chapter, update soon.
ilovehinata4ever chapter 14 . 2/28/2014
Stupid sakura b... u are a f... sult i hate u n always have u should have died!
AnimeWhoLockDiaries chapter 14 . 2/27/2014
OMFG i was shaking all the way through that with anger t sakura. I just wanted to be there with Hina-Chan punching sakuras face
ilovehinata4ever chapter 13 . 11/29/2013
Sweett! sasuhina rocks!:) hahaha u deserve shit sakura u totally suck how could u! Naruto love u!:/ juz cuz of a guy u turn into a ass..like really! Plus I just hate u like a million time more than usual! Dun u dare break up hinata n sasuke they r meant for each other! Aweaome story ! 6
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