Youre astoundingly bad at portraying someone who’s been tortured and Alone practically for two months. Just saying. PTSD is a thing.

Dammit, stop making me cry!

I love this story i really do, I just want to say with cracked or broken ribs, they heal on their own mostly and also wrapping bandages around the torso when they get their ribs hurt is just a trope and it actually does nothing. Also when you get your ribs broken or cracked it is AGONIZING to even breath, much less move around at all as youd be surprised how many movements you make use the muscles around ribs. I don't blame you as tv and movies have taught us otherwise but i just had to say so you know

Even this filler chapter is amazing

I loved this story, it was so good your a talented writer. You perfectly showed the growth of the main character
and Cato without it being forced all the characters felt like real people. I binged this in a day and I have cried so many times even the minor characters felt like real people and I cried for them too. I'm so glad I read this. Thank you so much for writing this! :) If anyone reads this before reading the story I recommend it 10/10.

Wow. This was truly amazing, thank you for writing such a beautiful story 3

can't tell you how many times I have read this.

I'm absolutely in love with this book!

I’M NOT EVEN DONE WITH THE CHAPTER YET BUT I’M ABSOLUTELY SCREAMING ABOUT “we’re worn down by water, not fire” THE POETRY. AMAZING.

AMAZING! I started reading at right around midnight and now it’s 6:20am because I couldn’t stop! I also won’t be stopping now, but I wanted to take a moment to let you know how awesome your writing is! I love the relationships between the characters, and you did a great job weaving in canon elements, and navigating all the characters.

了不起的故事！英语不是我的母语，所以读这篇小说对我来说并不容易…但你写得实在是太好了！情节跌宕起伏，人物形象丰满...

Fantastic story! English is not my native language, so it is not so easy for me to read this novel... But your writing is so good! Plot ups and downs, the character is very plump... And I really love these love scenes!

jelous cato is too cute for words. I'm so glad they're not platonic lol

So sorry this has been so hard for you. We understand.
And thank you for coming up with this idea! Not sure how this works, but looking forward to connecting with you and helping you out the best I can.

this was an amazing story! thank you for sharing it with us! I'm so happy to have found it and will be definitely back for a re-read

Oh wow, I could have never predicted this ending to The Hunger Games! For some reason I've always thought that you'll incorporate Sky and Cato into the original story perfectly and continue with the original storyline where they both would die at the end of the games. But wow, am I surprised!

I'm so glad that you decided to continue this story the way you did. That way, we can all explore how Sky and Cato's relationship will develop and how differently the Quarter Quell will be