That was sure quite a outfit that she came to class in lololol

Good first chapter! Loved it! Can’t wait to read more

Wow, powerful doesn’t even begin to describe this chapter! Just wow!

I use to dance so I really wanted Hermione to dance ballet. Searched and here we are lol. Great story by the way!

That story is fucked up oh my could you not of indicated that the molestation was going to be so vivid in the trigger warning. It was eerily accurate

Wow this was an intense story. The emotional rollarcoaster coupled with deep trauma for a four year old. I laughed, cried, nearly vomited one that specific chapter, and was awed by the ending. Truly unique and emotionally raw. I wont lie I wasnt a huge fan of Dracos verbal abuse at times but outside of that it is nicely done. One note tho in this final chapter you indicated Lucius Malfoy was arrested but he died a few chapters back...just thought you may want to fix that.

wait...wasn't Lucius dead?

It's impossible to read "Moby Dick" in an evening, even till 3 A. M. It's barely under 2,000 pages. I read it.

Really great story. Well done.
Just some contunuallity issues though, first Narcissa has to take care of Lucious during the day, then he had run off somewhere and then later on he's found dead. But then in the epilogue you said he's been arrested..
It also seemed like Ron was ment to be away with Harry investigating the death eaters, but then he's there with ginny while Harry was gone.
So those and a few other minor plot points that were not cross checked but otherwise a good story.
The chapter with Haley and what happened was bit confronting and I wasn't expecting such detailed descriptions so I had to skim through most of that bit. I'd figured out what had happened to her pretty early on.

Thanks for the story though :)

the epilogue was very nice. the story overall had great plot developmentangst.

aww, now it's getting romantic and Draco is showing live and compassion, which I like, although Hermione's life is getting even more depressing. I hope Draco tells her he wanted to keep their affair secret to protect her and confesses his love.

I think a trigger warning of "psychological and sexual themes" is not enough for a chapter that contains vivid description of child sexual abuse, adult behind raped, and torture. that was shocking.

this has lovely stuff, but it also has manipulative asshole Draco, which I don't like. He loves his daughter, but he just uses Hermione and takes from her. Everyone just takes from her without giving her anything and it's so sad.

i love the story so far but Malfoy is being abussive and i hate the fact Hermione thinks he isn't

THAT WAS SO ADORABLE!