I cried when u said they had to bury BlackStar and I mean no joke I fucking cried that is some sad shit... But it was still a great fanfic!

Yay! And this is the end of my journey through your wonderful works. This one is beautifully written. You did an amazing job at depicting their frustration. I also love how, unlike many authors, you don't describe how they look like in detail, and yet, I can just picture it myself because of how well you write their actions and interactions. The way you got them to do it was pretty genius, with Soul bringing it up in conversation and Maka bringing it back up seriously. Your lemons are very nice. Very tasteful, not vulgar. You write sex beautifully.
I'm pretty sure I've followed or favorited all of your fanfics, and I've put you on my Favorite Authors list. You write very original fanfics. Red Silk and Debaucherous Pastime are probably the best proof of this. I know on the last chapter of Debaucherous Pastime you said that your writing has evolved, and it has, but I still like it because it's such an original and refreshing take on SoMa. Red Silk... Oh God. What can I say? That one is just awesome. I can't wait for you to update it!
I think what makes you such a successful SoMa writer is the way you develop them individually. You make their characters "fit" so well with each other, and then, you develop them together. I was a bit hesitant to read Red Silk because of the prostitution thing, but I just thought, "Come on, you read 'Cities of the Plain' by McCarthy and loved it, and there's a prostitute character!" Anyway... you began by writing their characters really well, and then, you brought them together and developed their "relationship". It's just awesome!
So... here's my second long review. Thank you for writing awesome SoMa fanfics! Oh. I've also put you on my Author Alerts list!

Hey! Don't be sayin that "bleaker" shit! It's still amazing! Gosh, have a little faith lol

...actually, no, have a shit-ton of faith lol and it would gave been soooo funny if Soul had said "Sex isn't just sex. Sex is good for you. Sex releases endorphins. Endorphins make u happy. Therefore, sex is good for u."

OMG I'D BE LAUGHING MY ASS OFF IF HE ACTUALLY SAID THAT LOLOLOLOL CUZ IT'S SO TRUE! :3

Oh my.
This was beautiful. So jealous of your writing style :3.

sooo well writen

A completely different outcome than I expected when I first started reading. I figured the lemons would appear, but not in such a tasteful way. And even then, if I didn't know you from tumblr and GW, I would not have realized that the lemons would come by.

Seriously, I delicious read into what could happen should the fight against Asura take a turn for the worse. Definitely enjoyed your Soul and Maka.

Me(for future reference, Kisses): I really love your work!
Soul: oh god. Kisses here was just watching some of the Soul Eater Abridged Series Episodes by SEA and DAMN. THEY'RE SO RIGHT, WE DO HAVE WILD ANIMAL SEX!
Maka: Soul, calm down you're scaring the author this review is for. And also, we've only done it once.
Soul: twice.
Maka: FINE WE DID FOURTEEN TIMES!
Soul: oh babe, you kept track? You're too adorable sometimes.
Maka: *giggles* yeah, okay. You rule, Lueur-de-L'aube!
Me: wait. You've been partners for how long, again? Oh dear Shinigami save me!

So this is like…ridiculously good in every aspect. You've got their characters down so well, I love it! In complete honesty, if you ever wrote a novel, I'd read it, definitely!

This is awesome!

This is one of he best ive ever read. Good job im a hard one to please ]

your work is always sooo good X3

kinda good, i guess. its was a discriptive and i didnt like that but the rest was good. i think that soul and maka should be together. i really like the story.

Dark but not overly so. I enjoyed reading it a lot. Keep up the excellent work and keep writing.

Oookay, let me get comfortable. This is going to be long.

First, how absolutely tragic. I feel such sympathy and sadness for the characters that had to face death. Good job on tapping into my emotions for those people and sympathizing with them.

Second, Maka's characterization was brilliant. I always imagine what her reaction would be once she got sick andtired of killing things everyday. And you did a brilliant job of keeping her in character. So, I appreciate you keeping the realism of both Maka and Soul. Because Soul's dedication to Maka is also completely amazing.

The last, and my favorite thing, was that absolutely perfect smut. They place so much trust in each other and it shows. It was completely hot and perfect and I loved it. So much passion, so much lurve, so much fiesta!

The only thing I did not like about this was Black*Star dying. That made me cry into my pillow. HOW COULD YOU?! MEH.

This has got to be one of your best fics and don't make a sequel! That last note was a perfect ending!

Me gusta!

Absolutely enjoyed reading this! I love the different range of emotions and how you managed to keep the core feelings of the characters despite all the changes they went through.

Keep up the good work!

- Chiibi13