Glad that they died together, but it's so sad that I cried though most of it. :)

I really had to hold back tears during the first chapter; poor Sion Q.Q But I kinda understand Nezumi too and just hope they'll be together in heaven ...

IM CRYING RIGHT NOWTHIS IS NOT OK

I cried like a freaking baby while reading this

Ah this is really near make me crying...

But, i like see Shion death, i dont know why, but see he die make me happy and see nezumi sad make me super happy XD #plak.

i think Sion Live, but in the end he die and Nezumi die too, ck..ck.. ironic *gaploked*

But... this fic so great, near make me cry... Author-san, sometime make a fic NezuShion XD and make Shion die again XD #please dont think this.

sorry for my bad grammar and bad write, i cant inggris leanggue so perfect ( _ _)

... TTOTT shiooooooooooooooooooooooooo n NO MI PEQUEÑA MATA BLANCA

Perfect fanfic. I'll go cry my heart out now.

Aw seriously?! Awww what a sad ending! Gosh leave it to Nezumi to be a thick headed numscull! *scoff* and they say Sions the air head, lol. Gosh you should like team up with J.K Rowling and Susanne Collins as you all do a terrific job of writing sad stuff and then killing of wonderful characters, your killin me smalls! Lol, I still think this is suuper good, yet veery sad, and yeah, I liked it, somewhat, hehehaha lol jkjk, if ya wanna write something good, you gotta make em suffer! X) and NO im not a crazy chica, I just happen to like sad stories heheX3 Great, no, amazing,job anywhovilles!:)))

D"""""": AWWWWW! Thats so sad! Yet your writing it sooo good! Consider the feels tugged! Awww poor poor Sion and Nezumi, but your writing is really good and emotinal.:))

I...do not like tragedies...but...

N-Nezu...S-Shion...omg...So sad. i wanted to smack them both during this but it was really good.

The end...?

Just the fact that the gun was a little too much, instead cutting his wrist with his fav knife might have been more in place, slow and quite as he reminisces all those little things he lies about sion the most...

But other than that it was good, great job x)

Waahaaahhaha! ::Crying::
What a cold cruel world! That's so sad! Oh my lord Sesshomaru, when Shion dead in the Anime I feel out! But knowing he died again dear god how sad and Nezumi too!

You did great writing it really! What needs to be altered?

SO SAAAAD DX Made me cry... I REALLY LOVE IT!