Beautiful

I loved the story.

That should've happened actually, them getting married.

I loved the story.

Great writing, extreme fantasy, lovely comfort scenes. And sweet words of comfort and really realistic moments are indicate in it. You could really live with them at Zoe. Points. A. Some points I would break, but she remained strong. She is one hell of a tough, strong, amazing woman. She'll do great as the best mother and Jack would be the best caring father and husband for both of them. I loved the story.

Hehe that was good a little cheesy at some parts but overall unwashed impressesed a sequel would be great!

great story i really loved it and i cant wait to read more

keep up the good work :)

sequel

please make a sequel this is really good what will it be called.

And...what? Don't leave us hanging.

Loved it: D

disgusting story!,but a brave try!

hey great story, nice plot and love the ship. long chapters...my fav:)...if people say there were problems like...cassie not being introduced...to close to each other for the third episode, come up with some excuse like Alternate universe...works every time:) na but awsom story...is there going to be a sequel, i'm not sure if you have written one ...i'll check but maybe they could be major and colnel now:):) any way keep up the good work.

thanks

That was a really good story. I always kind of wondered what would have happend if things had happened differantly at the end of "Emancipation".

Oka,y for starters, it was great. But I do have a couple comments. One, it seemed like this took place in early 2nd season, late first, from what was going on. In emancipation, daniel was stilling calling sam, Cpt Carter. The abadonians still had there stargate blocked off, and other things. They didn't have that strong of a bond yet. but it was good, well written, I just think it would have been a little better, if you had made it take place on a different mission. Or maybe created one where it could have happened, in second or third season is all. Great story, I really did enjoy it. - The All Powerful Fu Fu

Write a sequel, write a sequel, write a sequel...PLEASE WRITE A SEQUEL!

Interesting story, but ... tons of discrepancies.

1) Janet's character was introduced in "The Broca Divide", episode after "Emancipation".

2) Sam and Janet did not become close friends until after Cassie’s adoption.

3) You mention Cassie who comes way, way after in “Singularity” which is about 10 episodes later.

4) You have Daniel and Teal'c on a first name basis with Sam, when in the episode, they are more formal and both address her as Dr. Carter. Also, the team’s familiarity is too soon, your writing indicates that their relationship is one of many years instead of just a few months.

5) Sam, a virgin? Please... afterall, she was once engaged to Jonas Hansen.

6) Jacob Carter was introduced in the second season, and I find it difficult to believe that Hammond would break protocol and allow Jacob into the facility when in season two’s “Secrets” he wasn’t even allowed to attend the private award ceremony in the mountain.

7) Abydos’ gate is buried and won’t be unburied for several more months (season 2), so for Jack or Daniel to contact Kasuf or Kasuf to contact them would be impossible at this time.

8) You mention Teal’c returning from visiting his family, he did not reveal that he had a family until the episode “Bloodlines” seven episodes later.

9)Though I am not against shippiness, I think the relationship between Sam and Jack is too soon. Sam didn’t even know that Jack was married or even had a family until “Cold Lazarus” four episodes later.

thats brill. i don't mean about sam gettin raped but te storie was exallent, if u wanna email me its lack and sam 13 hotmail . com. (just with out the spaces!)

YA! Hey write a sequel it'd be cool. But make sure that she keeps it LOL! JK! But you should write when she's having the baby! This is a great story keep writin'