Ca devient trop compliqué cette histoire et pas très crédible donc je vais arrêter là, mais c'est dommage car il y avait un bon potentiel. bonne chance pour la suite

Là encore, l'histoire semble tourner autour de cette Atlanta !? Est-elle une façon pour toi de t"inclure dans l'histoire ? C'est très dommage car je pense qu'elle gâche la fic. J'espère que les autres chapitres seront davantage centrés sur Draco et Harry

Le voyage dans le temps de Draco est une bonne idée, et innovante. Mais je ne suis pas favorable à ce personnage d'Atlanta. Elle n'a pas sa place dans l'histoire qui est suffisamment riche en personnage

Great story
Some things that i love about this fanfic are the repeated phrases like "that sounded like Dumbledore" and draco dilemma in his way of being and his former self. Sorry for my broken english.

Eh... myrtle loves to talk about how she died~

I had thought he would do it outside the stalls by the sink.. hoho.. its quite small and cramped out but i guess its the secure way, though probably not good for filming scene, so it happened outside.

Oh my! This hurts like a bitch

I want to see harry in slytherin
i saw your other stories about Atlanta black (shattered and over the rainbow) and i loved it so much. They're really funny, and sad, and dramatic, and everything!

Peeves, he adds excitement and drama. Its kinda funny how he makes the professors mad and always stirring up. trouble, keep things alive. Liked him in 5th with umbridge. Of course i probably wont say this if im actually a student there. Its handy to learn spells that can keep him in line. In a way, he trains students for their various abilities to avoid his prank. Hoho

The canon lucius would have been glad to hear his son befriending who could possibly be the next dark lord~ though i have some hope for canon lucius to turn neutral if he find it more beneficial, and malfoys value family. But im pretty alright with him out of the picture too, hoho

I recall owls dont need addresses to find the recipient? Of course, it never hurts to have them

I’m laughing so hard right now

Just ... wow
This was well written, exiting and an all round brilliant piece of fanfic.

It was terrific to read the story through the eyes of Draco, who clearly were not the commonly all knowing time traveler, a point I found specially refreshing.
It was nice to read a story where even though Ron is removed from the Golden trio it didn’t come out as bashing as many do it, and there certainly seems to be no ill thoughts of the Weasleys as a whole, I liked that a lot.

I also commend you in your creation of an entirely new side of the Black family tree making it possible to include alternative characters who still have a lot of connections to the original ones.
I am looking forward to reading more and finding out where Atlanta fits into this.

This is a 10/10 HP time travel fanfic that I really loved reading. Thank you for your great work!

Great job. I love a good time travel story.

Everytime he said quierellmort, I'm laughing hard , hahahah