Love this story! It's one of the best ones I've read. Keep up the great work.

Oh god that was really beautiful. I love how he needed to kiss her to make sure he's alive. That was so sweet. Writing was beautiful as well 3.

This is very lovely. I love the disjointedness, the urgency, the detachment from reality atmosphere. I think you did a great job at this. I was actually wondering if Squall had _really_ made it out the time kompression... all the hazy blurs and details in his head were beautifully written and delivered.

And yes, I agree with Emerald-Latias. This gotta be one of the few plausible scenarios in which they have sex shortly after the ending. :p

Lovely writing. Is this a one-shot? It reads like one, but I found myself wanting another chapter or two at the end. Well done.

I started this review four different times and deleted each one because I kept drifting into an area where the humor could've come across as sarcasm (to other reviewers, especially), and considering how concerned you were with posting this, I didn't want there to be any misunderstandings.

This is very well written. Evocative, emotional, urgent, and confident.
All the things that you were going for and weren't sure you could get. :)
Congratulations on a story well told.

Yes! This is just... yes! This is how I pictured them getting together early on. A total emotional overload, born of necessity and just the desire to hold on to what they have. I wish I could capture this the way you captured this. I love the intensity. Great job.

Oh, my god. This is so good, so, so good. I don't know what you were worried about, because every bit of this is brilliant and disjointed and connected at the same time.

FEELS.

Wonderfully written. I really like this. It's not often that you see Squall show emotions like you had him do, and I think you nailed it. Will there be more?

-B

It's rather like Squall to want to cling to life in a rather visceral way even though he's not sure of what he seems to want. I can see this happening and honestly, it seems like one of the few ways I'd buy him bedding her so soon after the party in the game's events. It just plays to that cloud of confusion and contradiction that he's constantly trying to work through. So yeah...long winded way of saying me likey. ;)