Reviews for Book 3: ShadowLight
0101011101100010 chapter 12 . 7/18/2015
I deeply enjoyed reading all 8 of your books, but my one question to you is, how does one simply conclude a story with a cliff hanger on the scale of the one you have left us all with?
Wraithyboy chapter 12 . 5/29/2015
So I read Bloodfire several years ago and then only recently came back to fan fiction. I have to say your writing is brilliant and I consider it a shame that you no longer appear to be continuing with Shadowlight, that or you decided to leave people on the evilest cliffhanger in history. Anyway hope you will eventually come back to this as unlikely as it would seem.
Goodluck with everything in life.
Camilinha chapter 12 . 11/27/2014
Omg! Please tell me you still intend to finish this story! Please?!
stapet chapter 12 . 5/12/2013
well just now i saw your message in the 11th chapter and as i have already said before your writing is really good i agree with your opinion that the 5 books of old series are kind of strange and cause of that many readers didn't like them (not that they even tried to read them in order to see if they were right) they just saw the summary or a few chapters and cause it contained a strange and different subject matter than all the other fanfictions they gave up on them
but your 3 books are really good, ok shadowlight may be a little boring but it is actually pretty good

but know this, we will miss you, terribly(well if not terribly then just very much). its actually quite sad to miss a good author. good luck in whatever you decide to do :D
burning book chapter 12 . 5/11/2013
:)))
funnelwebs chapter 11 . 4/24/2013
YYYYOOOOUUUURRRR BBBBAAAACCCCKKKK! YYYYAAAAYYYY! Nice chapter, I didn't catch any spelling or grammar mistakes, but I had to go back and review previous chapters to remember exactly what was going on, didn't really remember cause u haven't posted in a while. But... YOUR LEAVING AFTER SHADOWLIGHT? WWWWWWHHHHHHYYYYYY?!
*puppy eyes* *sniffle* please stay ur a great author...:::((((((
Elemental Dragon Slayer chapter 11 . 4/23/2013
Ah, sad to see you go but it happens to everyone at some point.

Good chapter again. Rathon's back in the game... :D
burning book chapter 11 . 4/22/2013
ur writing is good it will be missed and good luck with scholl
Gen'ei no kage chapter 10 . 4/4/2013
absolutely love all three stories i sincerely hope for an update soon theyre is a certain lack of romance as noted in a previous chapter specifically in the case of rathon as he s the main character in this book but it is still the best inheritance trilogy fanfic i have read so far. keep up the good work
Mrblue2 chapter 10 . 2/16/2013
Great series I love these! Please update soon
Elemental Dragon Slayer chapter 10 . 12/18/2012
nice chapters :D well written.

Oh snap, they're attacking? Balls. But that Q&A with Kaella revealed some interesting things...
funnelwebs chapter 7 . 11/20/2012
Romance isn't lacking just confusing, at the beginning, I thought brom an katleyn were gunna hook up and rathon and nayter, but it switched around a bit, had me confused in the middle, rarer sudden transition, but not a problem
I don't play halo often cause my parents think its too violent, I've only played it at friends' houses, same goes for skyrim
As you've noticed, I'm not old enough to say what games I can play what movies i can watch so...
Spaaarx chapter 6 . 11/14/2012
That was actually mildly surprising, I wasn't quite sure on Rathon's father until the Leader said pure-bloods. Will we ever find out who Rathon's mother was?

Other than that, good chapter, no errors, flowed well. Not much else to say.

Spaaarx.
funnelwebs chapter 6 . 11/10/2012
WwwoooohOooo! Go Zodion! Yay! I liked the last part, but it was a bit trite/banal. A lot of pieces of literature seem to have some type of situation like that. Still, great chapter. I still think that the romance is a bit messed up though... Whatevs
Manipulation and persuasion? I think they're about the same, but I guess it depends on perspective. "Nothing is right or wrong. Thinking makes it so." -William Shakespeare
Don't know why I typed that... O well
BTW not to criticize the very able-bodied men, but I believe that the gun regulations are too flimsy. PLEEZ don't come to my house a shoot me *cowers under bed covers*
Gaming Pro! Virtual high five!
Although I don't play halo too often, video games are BAHSS! And everyone should partake
Keep writing, and I'll keep reviewing!

-your very small and scared reviewer
funnelwebs chapter 5 . 11/3/2012
Sorry for not reviewing for your last chapter; I was a bit busy myself.
I found your approximate age because in chapter three, you said that the past time one could vote for president (2008) you could not vote, but you can now. Since the voting age is 18, that puts your age now at 18-21 cause four years ago u were too young to vote. Your chapters are good, the fourth was a bit lacking and some important events were left a bit undetailed for my taste(can't recall which one ADHD to u:P) but based on your situation, can't blame u. Good luck to u hope u end up with a good job and u can help ur elderly relative/friend if h can't find time for a second story with ur situation, don't keep going ur own life is more important than fanfiction... At least I hope so... Lol
That was a lot of personal info u gave out though..
Now I feel so young! ;P
FYI if u didn't no this age, gender, and personal economic status is not something to give out to the public... I'm rambling... Really...

Sorry Attention HyPeractive attention deficit disorder does that to u...
And tiredness... A high school entrance exam does that to u...
Red bull...
Nos...
Yum...

:D lol
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