| Reviews for The Coma of Adam Pendleton |
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  meli chapter 11 . 12/23/2013 I love this history. Please don't give up. |
 Klaroline Mikealforbes chapter 3 . 8/30/2013 Lol yes arthur your just a legend! |
| Klaroline Mikealforbes chapter 2 . 8/30/2013 No, not really. |
| Klaroline Mikealforbes chapter 1 . 8/30/2013 Oh wow, lol thats awesome. |
| BabyGlover chapter 9 . 4/6/2013 love it keep it going. |
| R6 chapter 6 . 11/7/2012 This is interesting. Adam/Arthur...Merlin/Mark and Gwaine/Gavin. I just read all six chapters and it looks like your off to a good start. |
| Pea chapter 6 . 11/7/2012 Nicely done. I am so happy every time that I see you have posted. |
| larasmith chapter 6 . 11/7/2012 Gwen could rearrange Morgana's face and apply a bit of vitriol into her pretty facade and then her hideous inner self will never fool anyone again! Gwen can't give up hope and have more confidence in herself. Arthur trusts her in securing his kingdom until his return! |
| Cici chapter 5 . 11/4/2012 Nice surprise! I was starting to wonder if it was a spell or if he may have just been a loon! Lol! |
| always-tethered chapter 5 . 11/4/2012 Hey dear guess what!? I just read all 5 chapters of your story this morning! Even though I haven't watched Merlin, I'm so impressed! Great writing :) |
| Laurissy chapter 5 . 11/4/2012 This is a really cool idea and i can't wait to read what happens next. |
| cvgirl chapter 5 . 11/4/2012 Just a wonderful story. I am so intrigued by what you have written so far. I am curious to see how you have Guinevere set up - does she remember? Is she withdrawn like Adam? |
| larasmith chapter 5 . 11/4/2012 Is there a version of Gwen, Morgana, and the rest of the knights in modern day England? Does this mean Adam and Arthur are one and the same person separated by only 1,000 years difference? Will modern Gwen recall Adam/Arthur? If Arthur was pulled from the past to the present could it be a sign that he needed to atone for some mistake he made in the past which would have jeopardized his relationship with Guinevere and if he succeeded in making amends in the present with the modern Gwen then he'll have a stronger chance of being able to return to his own time and reunite with his Guinevere? What will happen to Albion if Arthur is not there to fulfill his destiny? Will it cease to exist? Wonder if Adam will find his peace of mind if he met Guinevere? What if Arthur's Guinevere married his present reincarnation, Adam? How will it affect future events? Or if Arthur found modern Gwen and married her? Will the repercussions be disastrous? |
| Makennas Hunter chapter 4 . 10/28/2012 Loved this chapter. Poor Arthur! I think it would be cool to see a chapter from the perspective of those in Camelot. Great job. Looking forward to the next chapter. |
| LHC1 chapter 4 . 10/28/2012 Yes let us know what's going on back in Camelot. Who could the officer be hmmm |
