Oh, my heart couldn't take much more of Loki being sick the poor thing! Thor is absolutely the best most caring brother, Steve, Tony, everyone being so protective and motherly...speaking of mothers Frigga coming made me so happy taking care of Loki! I'm so glad Loki is finally well!

I knew it was Loki!

I love how this has started off.
Between Loki's hilarious threats to Stark, Cap being the "father" of the group, and a terribly wonderful storyteller Loki, I enjoyed this first chapter very much (I also can't help but admit to loving Natasha's comment of "You wanna come down and shoot some shit?"... that totally needs to be in one of the movies). Also, the action was perfect. All of the characters felt very... well, in-character. And such a cliff-hanger!
Bravo! I eagerly look forward to reading more.

I LOVE this soooo mcuh. Just had to let you know

oh shit, doom fucked with his magic. OOOOOHHH BOY THATS NOT GOOD

This is great! Oh the angst! I loved this though, great job. Sorry, I suck at being specific in reviews sometimes...

Love the story!

Well actually Loki does classify as an emo kid,he's only 17

I dont like the fact that any one can do magic if taught,it takes away the,well,the magic

That is awesome. But seriously Loki, Justin Bieber? I can tell why Stark gets spazzy with you when you mention it.

Thanks, this was indeed fantastic. I don't know why I enjoy Loki whump as much as I do if not beyond it humanizes him and brings out my maternal instincts. Thanks for a great ride; I teared up several times. I was once sick for 6 months before they figured out what was wrong and was wasting away and terrified so I absolutely get it. Your Loki's reactions are very real. Thanks for digging deep. :)

Such glorious H/C! *grins* And flatliners! You've seen it. Wow. O.O Great story, I really enjoyed the team dynamics. And the snark. :P

Loved it loved it, really enjoyable

UGH WHY IS EVERYONE ADORABLE

Oh that was beautiful.