Ohhh, I love the story so far! Do keep going!

More please!

i just got done watching No.6 for the first time and now i am OBSESSED! I need some lovin between these two Lol! XD I can't wait to read more cause i have to go...TT i will be back, me promise!

Really nice story. Only the thing I don't get is why the baby hasn't gotten older. Two years have passed, right? That baby should be a toddler by now. Kids grow much faster than you think. It's just kind of weird to have Inukashi grow up, but the baby doesn't...O_O

And I think you're being repetitive here:
{The thought of his Shion being with someone other than himself was too much for Nezumi to bear.}
You already implied that in the paragraphs above. Move on, give us new information. The most killing for a scene is when nothing happens to advance the plot. Every sentence should give the reader something new. Don't delve in the past.

How is it that the former actor has no lines for this moment? I really liked that part.

I love this fic, like, seriously can't even describble how much I love it.
Can't wait to see the next chapter 3

Buuu... Poor Shion :(

u must write more i wuv ittt!

nezumi is gunna beh the top 0/0 omg

awwwww nezumi got all lonely sad I WUVS UUUUUUUUUU best BL couple EVEARRRR

Nezumi's "suprise" could be worse so you are forgiven :)

Haaa? Nezumi is not going to leave Shion again?

I just finished watching No.6 (for the third time, mind you. I just can't get enough of it and Yuuki Kaji's voice acting), and I'm really glad that I stumbled upon this story for my biannual No.6 fix.

I love the story progression, and it kind of makes me feel bad that I haven't written my own No.6 fic. I love your style :D

Anyhow, I've really only read the first chapter so far, but I'm really eager to see where this goes. Please keep writing!

Rikiga as Shion's vater? Hmm... :)

Sad:( But really? You put Nezumi on the bottom? If you said so...