| Reviews for Breakaway Bella |
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  Guest chapter 17 . 9/17 You wouldn't say "Jasper gave I an apologetic smile," so don't say "Jasper gave Alice and I an apologetic smile." Use ME. "Jasper gave Alice and me an apologetic smile." |
| Guest chapter 14 . 9/17 It's PER SE (Latin), not PER SAY. |
| Guest chapter 13 . 9/17 It's "break it up, you TWO," not "you too" |
| Guest chapter 12 . 9/17 It's "beck and call," not "beckon call." LOL. |
| Guest chapter 8 . 9/16 It's "THROES of passion," not THROWS. |
| Guest chapter 6 . 9/16 "with whom she had moved in with" It's just "with whom she moved in" or "whom she had moved in with." |
 Annie Butts chapter 8 . 7/19 Omg how did I forget this story. Killer midget Alice would make a great story |
| Annie Butts chapter 6 . 7/19 I forgot about that that song was in this fic :( |
| Madison Elliott chapter 8 . 7/13 Omg that’s the funniest chapter I have ever read! Loved it |
| Guest chapter 35 . 6/15 SEQUELLLLLLLL, PLEASE. I LOVED YOUR HISTORY SO MUCHO |
| Joey Cullen chapter 35 . 6/16 Please consider doing the sequel as I’ve lost count how many times I’ve read this and I love it every time |
| Flora Mile chapter 35 . 5/21 Love it |
| PurpleRain27 chapter 35 . 5/7 Great story, loved it. Hell yes to a sequel! |
| EdwardsGuardianAngel chapter 35 . 4/1 Just finished. Read it straight through. Loved it & would love a sequel. I'd really like Garrett to get a happy ever after. Maybe with Carmen. Now I'm gonna check out your other fics. |
| EdwardsGuardianAngel chapter 20 . 4/1 I love Emmett! |
