Reviews for The Loyalty |
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Elise Deschat chapter 1 . 8/24/2016 Perfect ending...all that mush, not Sam/Ed, but the ultimate "love of brothers" |
Andorian Ice Princess-AIP chapter 1 . 11/13/2012 Oh gosh..today we lost a young RCMP to a t-bone it was horrible so am glad this had a happy ending for my beloved Eddie. Of course Ed would never leave Sam behind but the ending was funny. dang driving skills. Thanks again for another enjoyable read! Okay I better get back to my muse before she gets jealous haha thanks again my dear! AiP |
Pennie Borton chapter 1 . 10/13/2012 Greetings from Iowa, Good story so far so please continue. I also like the last few lines. I can picture Ed's expression. Lol! Thank you and have a great weekend! |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/12/2012 "Finally Sam nodded in resigned" - should be "in resignation" "The unis is putting up a roadblock" is putting up a roadblock. Really? Didn't you learn proper grammar in school? It's are putting up a roadblock "Sam and I are on pursuit" - should be "in" pursuit "Lifting his foot of the gas" - should be off the gas" Please fix the typos and proofread better in the future. |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/11/2012 i like the part now it does prove something what your driveing is bad |
Scat210 chapter 1 . 10/11/2012 Nice, Sam whump always appreciated, love Ed and Sam friendship! |
PhoenixWytch chapter 1 . 10/10/2012 LOL I love Ed and Sam. They are just... Ugh! I cannot think of the right word. Ed is so very loyal, same with Sam. Love, love, love this! Thanks for writing and sharing. |
sammygirl1963 chapter 1 . 10/10/2012 Awesome oneshot. Loved the fact that Ed refused to leave Sam, even though it could have cost him his own life! |
gabbygirl89 chapter 1 . 10/10/2012 Great story! I enjoyed it! |
sloop3000 chapter 1 . 10/10/2012 awesome fic :) and don't worry, we never get tired of you! |
J9yee chapter 1 . 10/10/2012 Great! |
JoaniB chapter 1 . 10/10/2012 And that is why I don't drive in TO. I really enjoyed the story, thanks! |
dawnpritchard66 chapter 1 . 10/10/2012 great chapter xx |