Hey! I love the intro to your story! its amazing! and a cliffhanger omggg! you need to update soon :) Are you into writting a new danny/oc story? If you arent its totally okay, but if you ever need a name, feel free to use mine! ;) (it is allyse by the way lolol :) ) Thanks! :)

It's wasn't bad. Please keep going

Ooo good cliff hanger I can't wait to read more. Please update soon I love this story.