TROLL! "Elvin" gave it away. It's Elven. Try the tab key. It's useful for...hm...I dunno...making paragraphs?

If you're going to write about some mysterious "Lost Elven Princess", then you could at least label it as AU. Also Tolkien was very particular about certain spellings, especially the fact that it was ELVEN not elvin or any other combination. The only kingdom in Arda at this time was Mirkwood, which would make any Princess in Middle-earth the sister of Legolas.

Have you read the “Official Fanfiction Universities of Middle-earth” by Camilla Sandman? If you haven’t it would be a good idea.

I really enjoy your fic and I was wondering if I could post some on my LotR site, I would link back to your author's page

Thanks

Bitty

I love your story but I have been dying for you to update! What else will I do on my school holidays!

Chelron just know how to ruin a perfectly romantic moment,doesn't he? But neways,it was a great chapter! Cheers!

kay, dude, cool story! kepp writing

Grrrr...DEATH TO CHELRON!

Anyway...this is excellent. I find it always hard to believe that Legolas would turn head over heels in an instant...but I suppose it's all worked out for the better in this fic. I have something similar...if you are interested, you can read it! E-mail me!

Silver Shadow (Aerlinndu of the Silver Wood)

You are such a good writer! Keep it up!

This story is wonderful! I hope you write more soon. I will come back to check for more story tomorrow. Poor Legolas, more so for Echo though.

Write soon!

*~Princess Myra~*

Good job with this! Your Legolas is so vulnerable yet strong... This kickin' romance is tastefully done and nicely written! Can't wait for the next chapter!

The story is unfolding wonderfully so far. You have really taken time to develop each emotion the character is feeling. Kudos! Continue,plz!

Oh yeah! Go Legolas! Keep writing!

I really like your story, i makes me very happy, add alot of horses and unicorns! and then, only then will you be okay. read my storyies

I'm eagerly awaiting another chapter to this tale. The Initial Incident was well plotted and I'm certain that the climax of this story will have that ring that makes the reader tingle all over.

Ooooh, I like! Your imagery is fabulous, very rich and descriptive. I love how Legolas is going ga ga over a girl, it is definately a nice expansion of his character! Finish this, it's good! Much love-J.