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That was beautiful and amazing and wonderful and I love you! I hardly cared about the grammar mistakes, your spelling was perfect and I knew exactly what you meant! It felt so real and like a real scene from magi it was so moving and touching for me and I thank you for that :)

Your fic is very nice,i love it.

chapter 2 is wonderful. I almost gave up at first, but when I followed it has become better. especially the promise at last. love it!

Waaa! I couldn't read the second chapter till today. I really loved this fic the little details does not matter. It's a good story you wrote. Keep writing darling, you're doing it well nwn
I recommended the fic to a friend of mine, liked it too although we both ship Sharrkan x Ja'far (I know weird ships we have xD).

And a last advice. Never but NEVER write from an iPod, phone or pad...it's horrible ! I cannot do it, so stressful and delayed Dx
Btw love your fic I'm going to stalk your account to read more (if you have more English fics, cause I don't speak French TTwTT too difficult for me). Nice day sweety