| Reviews for Dawn of a new Family |
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  Guest chapter 4 . 11/15/2017 Loving what im reading,Keep on going,PLEASE! |
| Levi chapter 1 . 1/9/2017 will they have sex! |
| Guest chapter 3 . 2/15/2016 I'm Sai hakusho I read this fanfiction black angel 2011 I loved it had many things happen so Domo arigato that was Japanese for thank you Signed by Sai hakusho and I might might just be watching you |
| Guest chapter 2 . 2/12/2016 My name is Sai hakusho I thank you for making this fanfiction of dawn and ash I hope that you can do another fanfiction signed by Sai hakusho |
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/14/2016 was ash really sleeeping |
| jill chapter 5 . 11/14/2015 I loved it! |
| Guest chapter 4 . 8/8/2015 lily |
| Guest chapter 5 . 3/21/2015 Aww that's adorable |
| robbie jackowski chapter 5 . 12/17/2014 the next pokemon story can you show brock wedding were his mom and dad and his brother and sister and his grandma and grandpa and ash and all their friends that they have meet in the past thank you thank you very much |
| Emily chapter 5 . 11/29/2014 I wish you could have named the kids ash jr and dawn jr |
| Guest chapter 5 . 10/11/2014 Naruto? Sakura is a Naruto name you... Person! |
| jenevi chapter 2 . 8/16/2014 i loved this ! |
 RedGyarados3 chapter 5 . 5/11/2014 This is a good story. Make a sequel please. |
| cody chapter 5 . 2/25/2014 Such a sweet and nice story |
| Randillio chapter 5 . 1/10/2014 are you going to make a chapter 6? |
