no

it was hilarious

Um... Did pit die?

I don't know why I haven't reviewed before, but I must express my sincere gratitude to you. This story is quite literally a piece of art. The characterization, the details, the setting, were all just so utterly believable. The smut was subtle yet arousing, the tension was taut. Also, might I add that you used Viridi's powers in the best way possible (that fruit was quite possibly one of the sexiest things I've ever read).

Applause. If you would ever create a sequel or continuation...ugh, jeez. Just. Your Viridi is awesome.

Excelsior.

I slipped into the older teen sandbox. Heh...

I like it!

No good soz

This story really needs a next chapter pls? I beg u

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I loved this so much, it inspired me to write a Pit X Viridi story of my own. If you checked it out (Nature's Lure) I would be so happy, but the main thing I wanted to say here is how much I enjoyed this story. Would love another chapter, and congrats on being the first to upload a Pit X Viridi fanfic to this site! And thanks for keeping them in character. It makes it seem that much more real.

Great story! I wish you make another KIU story on Medusa.

mylene farrow: oh, no... oh gods, no... DONT do that... it would be disgusing.../ by the way did i give you this idea?... nice job. make a sequel! xD or something like that.

Can you make a fan fic about Pit x Medusa and Dark Pit x Palutena PLEASE? I'm a huge fan of your fan fics!