Dame wish there was more

Another one bites za dusto

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Cute story

Please pick this back up

Please update

Fun fun fic :)

I have to sy I quite like where this fic of yours is going, your better at long chapters And first person writing than I

when shall u be updating this?

This is pretty good

I love Marisa's attitude in this. "Kill em with kindness."

Other than my personal distastes, I see no objective problems with this fic. I also found it entertaining.

uh, why are you using the anime as reference for this fic? You are, right? Because the source material and the manga both have Saito knowing the language through the summoning spells, translation of speech and text. Only the very non-canon anime has the stupid "translation spell" thing going on.

Also, in that scene, you have Louise annoyed at Marisa for speaking too much... when did that even happen? Marisa hasn't said a single thing to Louise in the entire time and then Louise just blasts her?

Well, you have Alice acting like a tsundere so I guess you don't care much for canon and are going full on fanon. I mean Alice thing is being a snarker after all.

Probably that's why Marisa doesn't act like Marisa at all

I thought Marisa's spells were powered by love?

this fucking sucks dick bitch

thanks for the update and the lenght of it D.
Ooh I really like Marisa personality