This story has been good up until two chapters ago. I feel like you have just rushed some parts of this story and completely skipped parts we should have seen, such as the Elric's finding out who Lelouch really is and what their reactions are, instead they just find out off screen and are kinda meh about it, which is pretty dissatisfying when this is one of the main parts of the story I was looking forward to, them uncovering Lelouch's past.

Also find it odd how some people know all about the outside world and Geass, yet no one else does, with little to no explanation. Just more that a bit confusing.

This story, basically: World of C Yo! Here's a body. *SLAP* now get your ass in there.

I'm sure they will need the lemons.

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I hope this story gets revived one day

That... was quite something. I did like it, especially the fact that no one seems to die (you did say that some who shouldn't have died will do so but didn't happen so far) and how the chimeras started to form in to LL's own group. However, it did start to seem like you took too much separate elements in this story. For Code Geass you used at least the anime, Nightmare of Nunnaly, Soubou no Oz (was that what it was called?) and that Akito thing I haven't seen. You did well with those, but I think you went a bit overboard with FMA... I mean, you took some characters and plot pieces from the first anime as well as the first episode of Brotherhood that isn't canon, the canon story itself, a movie and at least two games, perhaps even more. Don't you think you overdid it a bit? It was still good of course and you did well, but if you do continue this at some point I wonder how well you can keep that up.

One thing that REALLY bothered me was how little certain bits changed despite the fact that you used completely different characters for them. The thing with Russel and Fletcher for example; don't you think you should've changed it more since you replaced the Elrics entirely with two completely different characters? And in the incident where Barry first shows up, isn't LL/Luka acting a bit too much the way Al did? I'd suggest using a bit more of your own imagination in those parts.

In any case I will certainly keep an eye on Code Geass and FMA crossovers to see if the new version ever comes up. I sure wish it will.

P.S: If it does, I'd really love it if Suzaku met Miles; those two are alike in a way.

As an Indian I would like to clear something. There is no such language as "Indian" as India has over 1600 languages and 23 official languages. Making Indian a language is the same as making American a language or British. Please research a bit more and increase your gk so as to not be so ignorant and be so stupid.

That's true: LL isn't Lelouch. No way Lelouch could be such a sissy!

Its good, but What part of Lelouch resembles the Elric brothers blond & blue-eyed mother?

The only question I have is if The Prometheus has the same level of technology as it alter ...and also if it's a X-303 prototype here too
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I feel like Nina has already been forgotten about

Cool story!

Ehhh...nope. Sorry, I can't handle this ass-pull. LL is a random soul fused into Lelouch's body, and isn't Lelouch at all? That cheapens everything that the character has gone through so far and is really devastating for a reader that is here primarily for the idea of Lelouch was a Code. This started out so well, but now it's just really strange and has too many plotlines and characters going at once. After looking at a few other reviews, it looks like this was left unfinished as well. Sooo...nope, I'm done. This was enjoyable while it lasted, though sadly disappointing in the end.

This chapter is indesperate need of editing. You have the chimeras enter the room and stop and stare at LL's regrown arm, then like 3 sentences later his arm is back to a stump. It's extremely confusing.

This was a great way to have LL and Nina realize the balance of the world, but I'm still wondering how LL's Code can fix his head being blown off in about 10 seconds, but he's been suffering from an infected leg wound for like 4 hours. Um...what?

Besides that, I really adore this story. Sorry for not reviewing becore now, but I've been binge-reading and loving every moment! Such a fantastic story, and these two universes were meshed so well. I don't even like FMA:Brotherhood very much, and I'm still adoring this fic. There are a few plot holes and inconsistencies (like with LL's leg mentioned above) but overall this feels very believable and I really love how LL's character has evolved.

My only true, lasting gripe with the fic so far is how Zero Requiem is treated. In the 2 months that Lelouch reigned over the entire world, the anime simply skipped it - but it was implied through various bits of dialogue in the last 2-4 episodes of Code Geass that he slaughtered hundreds of thousands of people. If one person spoke against him, he would murder their engire family in cold blood. This is evidenced by the dialogue of one of the crowd members during Lelouch's procession right before the Requiem. Keeping this in mind, along with the fact that he Geassed hundreds/thousands of people to be his unwilling slaves, and threatened the world with FLEIJA explosions should any country deny or resist his rule, I find it VERY hard to believe that Amestris could be so far removed or uninfluenced by that. Especially for people to not recognize his face immediately. The more common, rural areas I can believe, but I can't honestly believe that the Amestris military didn't immediately know who he was, which begs the question of why they didn't imprison or try to kill him immediately. I also don't think LL's reaction of "what a naive plan" is very accurate to either the Requiem or his personality. He didn't expect to eradicate hatred; he stated that he had made literally everyone so terrified of him, so hateful towards him, that they would never want another massive war or dictatorship ever again. Thus, the people would band together to avoid wars and make sure to resolve all issues with negotiation rather than force. He wasn't intending to completely take away hatred itself, and Kallen even mentioned at the end of the last episode that they still had problems to work out, but that the majority of the world's attention was focused on helping other and rebuilding, instead of tearing down.

Anyways, those are just my thoughts. Can't wait to read more, and I am practically frothing at the mouth waiting to see LL learn some badass alchemy. :D