this is really good! it is an amazing concept, having them as demigods but not with the other similar things from the book!

YAY!

RANGERS APPRENTICE

where is the percabeth? I see perachel and perlypso, but no percabeth. i will be very mad if there is no percabeth.

I think you should take all traces of Perachel out of this wonderful story, else it filthies the plotline!

boi

While I’m annoyed you did not do the other books, I am very grateful, for the ending and synopsis. Thank you

ya but I didn't even read it

what a power move oml

Really good writing with a fair amount of typos. However if you love fluffy romance or HEA then this isn’t your story. Even though this specific story is complete the sequels aren’t which is something nice to know before you start reading. Even though I would’ve preferred the sequels to be complete the author is kind enough to provide a plot outline and a final chapter which I really appreciated. I wish more authors would do this.

Omgs I love how you made percy so badass

Really good a few typos though

You are a great writer. This is the best story on fanfiction out of a couple of thousands of archives I have read here. Still, your plot had the capacity to create a story more than twice the length of what you have written lest you write it completely.

Best ending of any story I have ever read in my life. Period. And I've read a lot of books :).

write the next chapter