So cute!

I cried.

I still am.

There. I've admitted it.

It's beautiful and it's breaking my heart and all I can say is thankyouthankyouthankyou because there is nothing else to say.

Xxx

Wah, this is the sweetest but so sad at the same time and I love how you added Teddy's note at the end. Argh, I'm being such a sap today reading all these Harry Potter fics! ;_;

It was beautifully done and I love the style of writing. You made me cry.

I have to agree with YourSSS (I think that's the name...) that you are perfection and this following paragraph is breath taking.

[Sometimes I wish I knew the wind's name, so that when it steals the whispers from your lips and carries them away in its blue, autumn hands, between tornados of falling leaves, I can scream, "Stop! Thief!" and know who to blame for the words I never hear.]

You are by far one of my favourite authors.

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Awwwwww :"(

I love the way you wrote this. It tells so much with so little, and pulls everything together in such a way, and it's sort of like perfection. Brilliant, Paula. I think I have to favorite it. :) I especially love the part about the cake. And what she meant when she said "yes."

Are you trying to kill us? That was so beautiful! And sad! I loveed it!

Oh my goodness, I loved this! Thank you so much for dedicating it to me!
YOU WROTE TEDDY/VICTOIRE AND IT WAS PERFECT AND I'M LIKE GAHGDIOKLGHFDIF AND IT'S DEDICATED TO ME AND NOW MY LIFE IS COMPLETE LIKE AKHGDKFHLKDFJ!
Siriously. Thank you :-)
I really loved seeing all of the creative places that you put her little scribblings. They were all so unique and different and I really enjoyed seeing them all. My favorite lines:
Teddy,
Sometimes I think I see you looking.
Are you?
I wonder if I sometimes smile like paper (too easily torn) and you smile like ink (indelible and staining my soul) and maybe we belong together but you just won't look.
I was thirteen years old the first time your name extinguished the candles on my birthday cake. You were blind then, as young boys often are, and so I offered you a slice and hoped you would taste the sweetness of what we could be together. You didn't.

You were a blushing fool whose hair danced through the colour wheel like children through flower fields; brightly, happily, peacefully. You tried to keep it turquoise most days, but, sometimes, you forgot. Those were my favourite days. You would blush and mumble and frantically try to calm your nerves enough to change it back.
This was so beautiful. I am awestruck. Thank you.

OnTheSideOfTheAngels, reporting for duty.

Paula, Paula, Paula. Oh my.

I think, (and this is hard for me to say,) but I think this may be my favourite fic you have ever written. EVER. And that INCLUDES Deamus. That INCLUDES ScorpAl. THIS ISN'T EVEN SLASH HOW DID YOU DO THIS TO ME

Wow. *gulps*

Really, though, this was breathtaking. It's fair to say that I am definitely a, uh.../fan/ of Teds, but this made me fall in love with him all over again. Your writing is surreal. Beautiful. Tragic. Amazing. Wonderful. The little snippets of where the notes are found are genius...but the letters themselves. Holy sh*t.

[Sometimes I wish I knew the wind's name, so that when it steals the whispers from your lips and carries them away in its blue, autumn hands, between tornados of falling leaves, I can scream, "Stop! Thief!" and know who to blame for the words I never hear.]

This, though. Cannot breathe. You are perfection.

.GOD. I've never read a Tedtoire fic as good as this! EEE! I love the little drabble style as well! AUGHH!

The last part made me cry. :'-)

naww :')

This was beautiful! Great job :)

You know how flawless and wonderful this is! I've never loved a characterization of Victoire this much. The romance is so sweet and realistic and I love it.
I love every single line, but this line: "I could be a poet. If you would be my poem, I would write you a thousand different ways and never throw a full stop at your smiles." is so wonderful. It has a certain ring to it that I adore.
Great great great fic! THERE CAN NOT BE TOO MUCH CAPS LOCK FOR THINGS SUCH AS THIS. :)