I love endings like that, where I'm free to scream in fury and spend the whole night squishing my pillow conducting the rest of an angsty ending for them!

LOL my favourite part was when Red said "So,sweetheart,you done your best to smell me lately?" XD But at the end was sad :( Green's unrequited feelings DX RED RETURN HIS LOVE!

That was pretty good. I loved it. Kepp up the good work fellow writer!

Whoa... That ending was really nicely done! Great job!

Holy muffincups. This was absolutely fluff-and-angst-tastic.
I'm gonna go get some lemonade now, and drink it with my Vaporeon. :P

Aw! They're too stubborn for their own good :(

Oh, this is gorgeous. Poor Red, Green just needs to grow up.

You can tell that this piece is raw, but there's something to it-a lot of things you could have stretched out and unpacked if you'd had more time. There are surprising moments of both emotional impact (Professor Oak and the TV show, ow) and sweetness (in Red and Green's exchange). I really liked the dynamic you portray with them; a chatty Red is an unusual sight, but I like it the way you write it. Nice work for just fifteen minutes. :)

ubu you write such angst omg

Eeeeee as usual I am late to the party. D:

But yes as I've told you before NGHHH SO PRECIOUSSSSSS

SO CUTE

HNGHHHH

How cute! I love originalshipping!

That last scentence. Genious! I love you.