that was good. Tell what happens when Legolas and Lily after they leave Middle-Earth

I've read both the stories in under 2 days, thanks for taking my sleep...
No, jokes aside, I really liked it. I liked the realism of it, the way you captured the calmness of the elves and their morals regarding marriage and the like. As well as the evolution of her own story.
At some parts it felt a little forced but that is most likely because of the old English.
All in all, I really liked it :)

This was a magical story...Your poetry, your prophecies everything was truly fantastic... I loved the way you blended Elven history with it.. the stories of Celebrian and her sister and the flowers of elanor...This is one of the best stories I've ever read...
But I would have liked a personal scene between Lily and Elrond, you know, to show how they became closer after the war... Other than this little disappointment, this story was great.