It was wonderful. Well wonderful in a absolutely tear-inducing way. You had me in years by the time Malcolm was said to be dead. Your writing is so beautiful and meaningful I love it so much!:D but anyway, yeah post more stuff because you have a talent with words I most defiantly DON'T have. Loved it!

Amazing. I absolutely love the line with "somewhere between a statement and a promise." Genius.

sniff...loved this story!

so sweet :')

Amazing writing.
I cried :'(

And what, exactly, is it that you think you're doing here? Murdering feels, maybe? Well, at least *they* are alive…

That was beautiful. Heart wrenching and sad and hurting, but beautiful :).

This is freaking adorable.
"Your heartbeat. When we were in Tartarus, it was the only thing that kept me sane."
RIGHT IN THE FEELS. OW. OW.
I was like, crying and talking to myself.
This need more reviews.
ALL the thumbs up :)

Highly realistic and definitely possible. I wish I were a Hundred Handed one to give you all the thumbs up you deserve.

-Silver

Absolutely beautiful! Wonderfully written.
Favorited :)

Oh gods, I loved it. So bittersweet, so tragic. Ugh, the hole in my heart from Mark of Athena just widened a bit...
Beautiful.

Totally favoriting this

C'est la vie, adios, good riddance, fuck you! You can be me and I will be you, you can live just like a star, I'll take my sanity you take the fame, I'm under and over it all! Under and over it.

How can something that is fictional in fiction make me cry so much.?

When it came upon Clarisse's death being mentioned, I burst out in tears.

WHY MUST YOU CAUSE SO MANY EMOTIONS.

Travis died? No.
Anyway, this was nice. Really sad. xoxo

Perfectly detailed and a lot of intrest to keep the readers going. A work of a true writer.