I think its great :) You have everyone in-character :) (*sorry i didnt feel like logging in :P)

Well done.

Wow. Words can't describe how much I hate you right now. If Han and Leia don't belong together, why in sweet Mahatma Ghandi's name would you write about them.

Hate,

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eh i like it better when they were together but good job

I really like the start you have here, it is an interesting premise that I have never seen done this way. I'll be looking forward to more.

Its an interesting idea and you execute it very well and believably, but...I love that pairing! Han and Leia are nearly perfect! sorry...well written, but my vote goes towards Han.

Wow, you never fail to please!

Okay, this is too funny. And very believable. Really, I would have voted for Luke and Leia if they were not siblings. I thought they'd have been sweet. You've got Han's prickly sarcasm and vulgarity down very well. Leia's sarcasm and bossy aristocracy are done well, too. I never saw how Han and Leia could have worked, but yes, I imagine they'd be good friends. Excellent start.

Interesting concept. I both agree and disagree on the whole "very different people" comment. On one hand, they have similar personalities and temperaments, which is why they worked in canon. On the other hand, they have different interests and come from very different worlds, which is a far larger barrier than most people realize - in real life a relationship between people like Han and Leia probably wouldn't work out. It's very nice to see someone looking at their relationship through that lens. I'm looking forward to seeing more of this.

Very nice beggining :) I'm waiting for more :)