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![]() ![]() ![]() SO SO SO SO SO CUTE. Oh gosh I love how the glass separated them. I could imagine all of Ichigo's adorable expressions to her. If you ever write a full length IchiRuki story, I WILL BE SURE TO READ IT. I love your writing style ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! They love each other! I actually wrote a special poem for IchiRuki, if you'd like to read it, you can pm me and I'll send it to you... Love the story! Keep updating! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's just to great... xD I really like this fanfic.. It's not too cheesy either... |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really good! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's not a goodbye. I like it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow this is so sweet! I love how you kept them as friends but inserted huge hints of that 'more than friends' factor ;) I can't get over how cute this is! Thanks for writing such an awesome one shot, I do hope you decide to write more :) And you could totally turn this into a full length story if you want! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is an amazing story, please continue! I REALLY LOVE IT SO FAR :3 |
![]() ![]() Please please please please continue with the story! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's cool! I like it! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Its super cute! XD I hardly review when I read a fanfic that I lile but.. I think you should add a few more chapters... |
![]() ![]() ![]() You should definitely continue this , the story is good and there are no mistakes what-so-ever D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very well written. I didn't notice any mistakes whatsoever. I love how the story just flowed. And it delved into the ever complex of Ichigo and Rukia of being more than friends less than lovers - even though the lovers was quite heavily implied in the last part. :) |