Really cool! More!

I originally read this fan fiction a while back when it had several chapters. I'm hoping you're revising and modifying your original work-with the intention of re-posting. Ignore all the haters and remember that you're a skilled writer. Most of the folks who read fanfiction don't have the talent or ambition to write their own. Kudos to you for producing something that's entertaining to read and worthy of someone's attention. I wish you the best of luck and sincerely hope to read more of your writing.

Excuse me, but I didn’t like your story at all! Loki is a real asshole in it! I thought after a while he’d really fall in love with Carolina, that they’d both love each other but no! You win Loki over, but the hell wasn’t there love in that story?! There is drama yes, but no romance at all between Loki and Carolina! A part of sex is in no way love! And moreover he raped her! I’m sorry to be hard on you, but I thought there would be more romance! Especially on Loki’s side. I hope you didn’t give up history, and you’d put on more romance. And that Loki and Carolina fall in love. I’m just disappointed that he didn’t both fall in love, and that Loki doesn’t respect her as a woman, I wish he would’ve respected her as a woman and not treated her like a pet! That they both actually love each other and that she convinces him not to enslave the world. :'(

Omg I keep retreading this like every year and please for the love of god if you finish it I will read it! It's soooooooo good!

I'm sorry I love the story in itself especially Loki but I feel like she's very weak not that I can blame her to much I mean he's a fucking Physicopath and so I wouldn't either but I also feel like she gave in way to quickly though everyone is different and veiws things differently. Good book just a little to weak for my tastes

Look at this stuff
Isn't neat? Wouldn't you think my computer's complete?
Wouldn't you think my computers the one
The one that has all of the stories?
But who cares
No big deal
I WAAAANT MOOOOOOOOOOORE
(yes, I know I skipped a portion but thaz not important)

Should I be worried?

lol

Omg dude ur so savage :))

This is amazing I can't wait for episode 19!

Nice story you have there! But I guess you are not going to finish it, are you? :/

Your story is really awesome. For me it's the best fan-fiction that has written about Loki's possible love interests. You have captured his emotions and behaviors really well and I love the way you have created the character of Caroline. But it worries me that you haven't updated the story for about 2 years. If there's any chance that you can continue it, please do continue. I can't wait to read the rest of the story. I think you are a awesome writer.

First chap. And I already love it

Yaaaaaaaa WHERES THE ENDING

Nice