Wait. Hadn't the doctors thought Asuna died as well? If so, why were they only surprised to see that the child survived?

You had me spiraling for minutes on end, trapped by emotions. That was crazy

What a great story that was! I think sao is great, I was horrified when Asuna was unconscious with the baby to! But Jesus makes miracles!

You get my uncore.

Firths i tought if will hapen dead in pregnancy but i read all the end and the baby is alive!great history.
"And you are being watched!"-C.U.

Phew! That was a hell of a ride. You promised an emotional roller-coaster and delivered. I forgot that the title of the third chapter was Miracle...if I had remembered, it might have saved me some angst, LOL. I thought their characterizations in that third chapter were perfect, that Kirito would want to save Asuna, despite how difficult the decision was, and how Asuna would naturally want to save the baby. Really glad they had a happy ending though.

Um, nice intention for basing their daughter off of kuroyukohime but if I recall correctly kuroyukihime has an older sister.

I absolutely love this story. I think I it's one of the best Kirisuna fics out there. You're portrayal of the story and characters is magnificent. It's probably my fifth time reading the story. Amazing job!

Very heart touching... :')

It is actually so cool! I can't believe you can make this stuff! It's so amazing! How can you do stuff like this anyway?

How do I even begin? That was amazing, put simply. I could see just how much thought was put into this. It was short, but also just the right length. You are a wonderful writer.

Fück u

SUCK

I Say It's Name Should Be Yui

This is a really cute and well written fanfiction! 3