| Reviews for Forbidden Romance (discontinued) |
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  Guest chapter 16 . 6/20 UPDATE |
 thewillofpos chapter 16 . 4/14 Ah. So sad to see this discontinued. I really enjoyed the premise and overall plot of your story. Thank you very much for giving your readers and I the opportunity to read a great story. Hope you've been well. :) |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/23/2019 This was nothing like the real books but still good job! |
| Guest chapter 16 . 3/9/2019 But there isn't any chapters! Is it tomorrow yet? |
| Guest chapter 15 . 3/9/2019 Luke is stupid! |
| Guest chapter 14 . 3/9/2019 Don't kill Percabeth! They're only the best ship ever! |
| Guest chapter 13 . 3/9/2019 That was a really cute chapter. |
| Guest chapter 11 . 3/9/2019 A baby... But it wasn't the... Never mind. |
| Guest chapter 10 . 3/9/2019 Kill Baal Guy! |
| Guest chapter 9 . 3/9/2019 Okay. Kill the King! I hate him! We're not safe until he's dead he'll come stalking us at night. Sorry. I just don't like the king or his son Luke. |
| Guest chapter 8 . 3/9/2019 Fat, balding drunk - Gabe, Percy's stepdad. |
| Guest chapter 7 . 3/9/2019 Whoisthisman? |
| Guest chapter 6 . 3/9/2019 Tell him, tell him. |
| Bookmaster1234 chapter 16 . 12/30/2016 Why is this discontinued?! It is amazing and you have left it on a cliffhanger! It is a very good FanFiction, I have actually read a similar book recently. I really enjoyed it, it was called Nefertiti and is written by Michelle Moran. It is historical fiction ( I love history, I am the daughter of Athena and such a nerd) and tells the history of Nefertiti and her sister mutnodjmet in a very exciting and interesting way and the plot is quite similar to yours. Have you read this book? If so Were you inspired by it? If you have not read it I highly recommend it to you. But anyway, you are a great writer and should be proud of this FanFiction so please continue! |
| Daleisacoolgirl chapter 9 . 4/24/2016 That is not a stupid reason to cry |
