Cuteeeee

AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH! YES JUST YES ...THAT WAS PERFECT MAKE MORE PLZ!

You've got real talent in writing NatsuxErza stories, I hope these continue!

-squeal,squeal, fangirl then faints- Love it! 3

Man, I hated this fic. NatsuxErza sucks.

Naw, just kidding. A nice conclusion to your first fic and you've done a great job of representing NatsuxErza again. Thanks so much for writing this and the prequel! I hope to see more NatsuxErza from you! (Also, have you considered writing NatsuxWendy?)

Lol. Okay, so I was late in agreeing for the sequel since you already uploaded it but nonetheless, Great, amazing, superb.

I literally cracked up at the Elfman part, you're right! i also pretty sure it didn't make any sense -thinking- oh well, looks like Elfman isn't cut off to be a teacher. Lol.

This is amazing, honestly , you really did do an awesome job, I wouldn't mind reading more.

I know you are a NaLu fan and all and this is probably asking for too much but, hope you continue to write more NaZa, you definitely have a talent for this.

Plus, it will be such a shame if you stop now, you enjoy writing it and we love reading it, perfect combo eh? Well it is up to you so Good Luck ;)

Love it. I can't say more than that. It was to be expected, she wanted some payback and she was sure to give the same or more. Meaning? She tasted strawberries when kissing him, he will taste fire when kissing her. Oh my, I do wonder why that never came to my mind before. Again, great job!

still kinda cute, but what brand of candy do you enjoy with the strawberries?

Loved it, a lot. Figures Erza would find a way to 'get back' at Natsu, heh. Again, I hope you do more NaZa fics. :3

Once again I loved it. Especially the whole flamed candy thing. I might have to steal that.