Hey. I don’t know if you’re still on , or if you’ll even see this, but I wanted to say thank you for writing this story! I definitely enjoyed reading it, even in incomplete ’s got an interesting premise, solid writing, and is further helped along by featuring two of my favorite characters.

This is a really good story! Hope that you continue this story at some point! ...Even if I don't expect you to.

It's a Great story and please continue this story !

awesome chapter! love this story really hope you’ll update soon!

Awesome story with immense potential. Particularly liked Luke's observations on Anakin and love

Wow! I only just found this story, and I love it! Obi-Wan finding hope and his connection to the Force in training first Mara, then also Luke was wonderfully written. The children were a delight, their journeys well-written and thoroughly believable. Loved Obi-Wan coming up with progressively more difficult "missions" for them to help people, until they became old enough to find their own tasks. And now they're taking down Jabba, yay! Though... they're making plans for what comes after, but they don't seem to be worrying about the other, offworld Hutt families, whom we've seen in TCW, moving in? Don't they think they'd be very bothered with losing Tatooine, or they don't know about them, or they don't exist in your version of the Galaxy?

Anyway, I'm excited to see where else you'll take this!

I think this makes sense. Even if he didn’t want to admit it to himself, he didn’t really want to talk to Qui-Gon. He didn’t really want the accusation he thought he would find there. I think we often do this in our own lives— assume someone will judge or accuse, when they really aren’t as hard on us as we are on ourselves.

This needs to be finished

Oh come on! The climax of this arc just reached its end! Now I’m here waiting for the resolution of it. I want to read about the aftermath! It’s been over a year. Get back into gear please!

Mara's star in the darkness makes a ton of sense to me. I hadn't even considered the Emperor finding a replacement for her nor the concept of Mara feeling she needed to be worthy of what the replacement was to go through. That's an incredibly powerful thought/motivation right there. Well done.

It's been almost a year since you updated, hope to see an update soon, this is the best au Star wars story I've ever read and I'd hate to see it abandoned. But I'm not above sending a plot bunny your way.

Darthmaul is Cannon to have come to tatooine and found Luke, but what if he came across Mara instead and kidnapped her, could this be her final trial or a way for obi wan Kenobi like in Cannon to face him one final time and end what was stated on Naboo so it long ago

I like the way you've written the action, also the way you've built the training over fifteen years or so.

My preference would be for slightly longer chapters but It's your story.

Any more chapters due?

Like it so far. When is the next chapter?

It wasn't just the code that twisted Anakin, but it did play a part

You did a very good job with the action sequences.

So, Boba Fett knows that there are Jedi on Tatooine. After the fight in the throne room, others might suspect as well. The Empire might pay a lot for information like that. Seems like it is time to leave Tatooine. Can't wait to read what happens next.