FAN!~

Please write more. I really liked this story but I frrl bad for Erica, u wish she was turned but I hope she doesn't turn into a slut like in the show.

How dare you not update this fic you made, it's amazing! The plot is incredible, I love all the characters and how the movement is going! But unbelievable that you just abandon it just like that! Please update this fic right away! The suspense of what going to happen next is killing me!

It's really good and I hope you update soon. I know a lot of people don't usally reply to these things but I know they are waiting to for a spectacular chaper and more so forth!
Dont forget to enjoy the writing but dont go lazy on it and stay on track because that what usally get a reader confused and give up on a story before it even started.
Have a good and happy life

I've got to say that I'm bummed this story was never really finished, and I would have really loved to see the end game. But such is life. I just wanted you to know that I truly loved this part of the story I read. Anyways, I thought you needed more praise for this story because I have always thought it was great. )

Kai

I don't like Allison's parts in this...I was so hoping she wouldn't be like she was in the show but she is...she is so quick to be manipulated and she keeps letting Kate get her way...I was really hoping she would stand up for herself and put Kate in her place...plus Allison should be able to see that Kate is only targeting Derek and that should make her suspicious but it hasn't...I just don't like it or get it...I don't know what you have planned for Kate and Allison but I hope Allison starts actually running things and shuts Kate up soon...I do love this story though...I want more Sterek moments though...those two together in this story is amazing...hope more moments for them two is going to happen soon too...update soon please!

Glad Scott and Stile's will still be friends. Still hope Stile's doesn't do the loyilty thing though. Someone in that pack needs to be able to think clearly without being affected by Derek.

So is Stiles some Omega that is aligned with the pack? I don't understand this 'pack' at all.

Oh, can't wait to see more!

I'm getting a little confused about the whole pledging thing and why it's so important...a pack is a pack and the pledging thing really isn't making sense...I also wish their was more Sterek in this...it's chapter 15 and we haven't really seen any Sterek moments...kind of getting bored a little

The abomination rules, you gotta love em. I wonder what someone who commits great betrayal turns into.

I feel bad for Stiles. Bad enough Jackson is a jerk but Scott is being an idiot and ignoring him all because he had to listen to Jackson and take the stupid pledge. I hope Stiles doesn't do it as well. I like him just the way he is, though i would love to see him clock Jackson and show him just because he is a head beta doesn't mean he can't get an ass kicking.

I just don't know what to think of this Stiles. First he tells Scott to go to talk to Derek with him a few chapters ago about a problem with Jackson. Now he is trying to avoid the pack? I don't really understand this...I guess I'm continuing to read this to try to make sense of this.

OMG! Now Stiles is all alone:(. The only one not pledged. I thought Stiles would have caved under the pressure first but I guess not... Oh well, great chapter! Please update soon!

Your characterisation is brilliant. Jackson is an ass! I get that Derek feels the need to increase his pack, but I mean, come on! Jackson?! Poor Stiles. I'm looking forward to reading much more!

Keep up the amazing work!
Anna-Margaret
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