| Reviews for Sun's Heir, Death's Guardian |
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   BabLe7 chapter 1 . 8/21 So, ummmm... Naruto was 16 when he fought Nagato the first time. Why is he 17 at the end of the chapter instead of 23 since you said it was a 7 'year' timeskip instead of a seven 'month' timeskip? |
| Zero chapter 27 . 6/1 Hello. I come here from the "Reading" by Engineer4Ever. I want to tell you something: CONGRAGULATIONS ! Somehow i dont know you take a overused plot and a overused character and you make a amazing story with a very good character development ! I REALLY like this story. I would like the current series use Helios the way you use him here. Thank you for this amazing story. |
| Dragonheart12345 chapter 1 . 4/28 Another thing I am wonder is that did you even read Naruto or did you just look it up as well as the Percy Jackson series because there are so many thing in this story that isn’t right or make sense |
| Dragonheart12345 chapter 1 . 4/28 Why is Naruto hating on Percy so much. Even more why is percy being bashed he didn’t do anything wrong. Such Naruto said he should know this stuff but he only knew about the god for at least three years and unless your a child of Athena or super smart at Greek mythology or been around a long time then you would not know even half of the myths so Naruto shouldn’t say he knows all of this and being so mean and angry about it because he was like that too and could be a bit nicer to him. I just say but all in all good story |
| TatsuyaShiva4 chapter 1 . 4/16 Would be a much much much better Story if Kushiba was Amaterasu or at least a Daughter of Amaterasu and maybe Tsukyomi. But it is an good Story. |
| pepejohn chapter 3 . 2/8 This guy's so violent towards Apollo and others to the point it's annoying. Feels like padding so I'm out |
| xSean chapter 4 . 1/31 Poorly written, you make it seem as though hes already been in a relationship with these chicks and then hes run off. Which can't be true because they would have been very young. While Naruto should be 22. Don't like how you've changed him either. He isn't the type to pick up a Sword and Shield, especially not a weakling who somehow gave him a hard fight from Ares Cabin. What a joke. |
| WeslenBR chapter 27 . 9/29/2019 muito bom |
| WeslenBR chapter 17 . 9/16/2019 kkk |
| Power of Magic chapter 19 . 7/30/2019 About time that old Warhawk of a bastard died |
| Power of Magic chapter 15 . 7/30/2019 Oooohhhh Tahlia's jealous that other girls are after Naruto |
| Power of Magic chapter 1 . 7/29/2019 Good story so far. I think that this is the first fan fiction that I've started reading where Naruto is the son of Apollo, because I've read a few other fan fictions where he is the son of Artemis |
| lara5170 chapter 27 . 6/12/2019 This was a very good story and I would really like to read more. |
| lara5170 chapter 14 . 6/12/2019 Naruto is a ninja would he really leave behind the body of missing nin without removing his head especially when he was brought back to life himself? |
| lara5170 chapter 1 . 6/11/2019 If he was 15 when he came and it has been 7 years then wouldn't he be 22 and not a teenager anymore? |
